Okay, too many moments to list - but the whole thing, in talking with each other, amazing. I like how Sam is still mad at Dad. How Dean remembers a different Dad. Love how you did a plausible reason for their number one rule - We do what we do and we shut up about it. Makes sense - poor Sammy not knowing what he was saying getting them into trouble.
Like your flashbacks. Placed well, great timing, and weaves a pattern to the story.

Good setup. Feel badly for Sam's leg, but Dean's not much better with his bloody head. I like the way he kept wiping sweat, only later realizing it was blood.

This was amazing! I can't wait to read the next story. It's got Brenna in it and I absolutely love her!

AHHHHHHHHH!

This is so perfect and brilliant and amazing and I cannot express how much I love it. You've got the brothers down perfectly and the plot is fab, the flashbacks are brilliant and ugh, I could talk about hoe good this is. Brilliant work man

Loved this. Loved Abe. Of course, loved the brothers. Loved the premise, it was well written, good description of action, good amount of angst, and loved the way the brothers looked after each other. Thank you for sharing.

That was really good. Thank you

hay! you are actually a great writer...there is such a balance in each and every element of your stories...it is quite impressive...hope you continue to write...you have real talent and ability to convey your ideas in a great way...love your stories

This was absolutely amazing!

Great story! Loved the native american side and the shaman that turned into a wendigo. Fantastic plot!
Dede

Excellent story!

I read this once before and loved it then. I was in the mood for early SPN and I ran across this story again. I really like this one. Enjoyed it just as much the second time around. Thanks for sharing.

Just finished Rambled on found through a rec list and very happy to see I will have plenty more to ready. Love your writing and characterizations. Thanks for writing and posting.

Uh. I don't know how to express this all, but basically this was the most amazing Winchester fanfic I've ever read. I can't explain it very well, but you showed the exact forms of brotherly love between Sammy and Dean that I've always wanted to read about, but hadn't come across yet. The story was so natural and showed Dean and Sammy perfectly, and I could imagine J2 actually acting this out. The flashbacks were perfect, and also natural. Also, thank you for the perfect amounts of Dean whumpage, with a side of hurt Sam. I loved every painful shudder *cackle* Seriously though, thank you, thank you, thank you. You are amazing!

Hello. Could I download this story? Do you have a PDF form or is there have some link I can download from?