|Reviews for Ramble On|
| McB chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
oh please please please update soon!
| LynyrdSkynyrdRoadie chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Cool. keep goin'.
| LovinJackson chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Oh i so love your stories ... you have me hooked already. Man Dean is a stubborn bastard, but it makes him even more frustratingly loveable lol does that make sense.
I really cant wait till your next update. Great Start :-)
| sallydeathhands chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Yes! You're starting another story! You've made me so happy, it's like an early Christmas present. As usual, your charaters were awesome. I can't wait til' the next chapter.
| TraSan chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Really great start! I recognized your name after I read this story, and thought, "Oh, I like her work. I think I'll go read some of her older stories."
I popped in, and realized you've only written two others, and I've already read them both! Excellent job with the guys.
MacGyver - classic! I also liked how Sam's voice of reason in his head was Dean. That's actually happened to me (except it was my husband's). (c:
Looking forward to the rest of the story.
| Freyja529 chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
You can't leave me hanging like that! You've set the scene for a great story and I can't wait to read what happens next.I really like that you've thrown them into a situation where they have to work together against a multitude of dangers - the Wendigo, their injuries, the fact that they're completely isolated and miles from civilization. Keep typing and I'll keep reading:)
| princess peanut chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
All right! You're back! And I just have to say, even better than ever! What an intense start! And what the hell was that cliffie about? lol Of course it was awesome. Gotta love stubborn Dean. But what would Sam do without him? Love the use of Zepplin here! Awe heck, loved every minute of this read. I'll be biting my nails till your next update!
| ILoveMyFish chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Yay, another one of your stories. I really like your writing style, and the hurt guys is always a plus. Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S. - I loved this:
“You want me to warn you?”
“When you start singing?”
“When I set this,”
| sissa610 chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
love it love it love it! can't wait to see what happens!
| irishgirl9 chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
That was a great chapter. I'm not a big Zepplin fan, but Ramble On is my favorite song by them. Nice use of it. I also loved the flashbacks. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
| Rinne chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Yay! Another fic!
Fantastic start. And I love that you've jumped into the action.
| EagleGirl6 chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Yay, a new story! Thank you!
Nice! That's our Dean, always with his hand on the gun:
Sam had lost his gun when the boulder hit him, but he knew that Dean would still have his. He knew it would be clutched in his hand, conscious or not.
I like how you describe the voice in Sam's head as being Dean:) -
First things first, Sammy, the voice that was Dean in his head reminded him.
Boy, you sure know how to bring out the emotions in your reader. I can feel Sam's urgency in checking on his unconscious brother, and his feeling of desperation in the cave because you describe it so well.
So cool that Sam just knows Dean will take over when he wakes up. That says so much about Sam's trust in big brother. I just loved this sentiment!:
He didn’t lift his head from Dean’s shoulder so that he could feel when his brother became more awake, ready to resume control.
And OMG, you do the pain so well, poor Sam! It's totally realistic, not contrived or underplayed, either. Wow. When Sam asks for help, you know it's bad:
“Dean, I need your help, man,” Sam continued, allowing the pain to seep into his voice.
The banter in this is cracking me up! I love this:
“Geeze, Sammy, what the hell is easier than falling?”
Thank you for how you described Dean being sick. I always hate reading it when people describe every gory detail, but you (of course) did it very tastefully.
Sam wants Dean to sing to him! Ahw! And the "you want me to warn you" exchange was great.
You've channeled 'lil Dean, just like John said in IMToD! Excellent passage:
“It’s okay, Dad. It’s okay, now.” Sam heard Dean’s voice, steady, sure. His brother sounded older than Dad. Sam knew he was taking care of it. He knew Dad would be okay now because Dean was there.
Ugh, you totally caught me off-guard, good job:
Dean wiped at what he’d thought was sweat and this time looked at his hand.
Dean is so clever! Using the duffel bag as a blanket:) And how awesome that Dean learned survival tricks from MacGyver! My hero!
I love what you do with Dean's lashes!:
his lashes throwing shadows on his cheeks from the dancing firelight.
This was an awesome start! I can't wait for the next chapter:)