Reviews for While You Were Sleeping
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 4/19
One wonders: How does being pregnant affect Terra's powers? Do they allow her to fight past the first trimester? Was the same true of Starfire? (I don't know anything about how the alien biology works when pregnant. It could make her stronger for all I know.)
lovesuigetsu chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
linda!i love terraXbb!
cGIDEOn chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
This is G-O-R-G-E-O-U-S! I love the story!
creativityabounds chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Well, it's not a bad idea you have here, but you definitely have some things to work on. The writing is really dry, in my opinion, and a little short. Short isn't bad if you're really good with packing a lot into it, but this isn't the case here. Do more than tell what's going on, show it. Be more descriptive. Try to stay away from clich├ęs.
Tech-Man chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
Great I can't wait to see the next story you have panned for out favorite couple. Please keep up the good work! :D