|Reviews for Healing Tea|
| Nightfall2525 chapter 11 . 12/10/2006
will there when the plean for the night..good thing Seto has his own plain
| Nightfall2525 chapter 10 . 12/10/2006
and here i was waiting for her mom and dad to stop the wedding...
are you going to have them try and malk money out of there new son-in-law?
| Nightfall2525 chapter 8 . 12/7/2006
so Roland is Seto's and Mokies dady but Seto yells at hima and tells him what to do all the time?
update soon when will the big day be?
| Nettlez chapter 5 . 12/4/2006
awesme stuff. It looks tonnes better now you've put spaces in. So much easier on the . But great story, update soon! toodles
| Nightfall2525 chapter 5 . 12/4/2006
will that would have given the others a show...
so has Seto talked to Yugi's grandpa?
| r0gue lebeau chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
This story is awesome! I'm loving it! :) Quick question, is Dr. Faust THE Faust from Shaman King? :P ;)
| Nightfall2525 chapter 4 . 12/3/2006
you know how to make a person cry a lot... Seto as a lot of good friends...
will you can have it when she comes home wiht Seto that night he shows her just how much he loves her and sees her as a hole person..
| Nightfall2525 chapter 3 . 12/2/2006
you it was a lot better to read...but you still have a long road ahead of you...
keep up the good worke and update soon
| Nightfall2525 chapter 2 . 12/2/2006
that was good but you do need to do like Nettlez said...
it would make it EZ'er for us to read.,
| Nightfall2525 chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
that was good and you had me and can that be today?
| Nettlez chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
it was good, but you need to put spaces in when different people talk. eg.
Seto and Mokuba were eating their breakfast and watching the News, when there was a News Flash: “Star Ballerina Tea Gardner was injured in an accident. She received damage to her legs when the car she was riding in was hit on the passenger side. Her condition isn’t life threatening but she may lose her right leg. We will have more on this in a later News show.”
“Seto, Mokie said. "Did you hear that?”
“Yes I did” Seto said.
“We have to find out how she is” Mokuba said.
Seto got up and walked to the phone and called he Hospital that Tea was in. “Alright and thank you” Seto said. He hung up the phone.
“What is it?” Mokie asked.
“She’s in Intensive Care and she did lose her leg. They will keep me informed as to how her condition is” Seto told his brother.
“We have to go see her” Mokie said.
“Listen only family members can get into Intensive Care” Seto told his brother. When she is allowed visitors they will let us know and then we can go see her.
“Alright” Mokie said.
“We need to get ready for school” Seto said.
It makes it far easier to read. Also something i noticed is you over-use the word said, try and use different words, like seto sighed, Mokuba stated desperatly, stuff like that.
Other than that it was an alright story. Update soon,