|Reviews for Red vs Blue: You Have a WHAT in your Pocket?|
| AnonymityFreesSpeech chapter 2 . 2/27/2010
"And I'm not leaving until you explain to me what the heck IT (should be IS) going on!"
Also, for accuracy's sake, I would return to the original script for the first chapter. For the Red Team, it should be changed just before they bury Sarge, and the Blues should stay the same until the Reds arrive.
Use "Junior" instead of "TJ", too.
| undead3 chapter 2 . 2/2/2010
so damn awsome...
| ArmoredSoul chapter 2 . 10/2/2008
Got to love how Church pieces things together.
He's actually pretty smart when he wants to be.
Though he also a smart-mouth jackass.
I wonder which group will come across Team Rocket first...
| jamsta58 chapter 2 . 5/5/2008
awsome i cant wait for update
| john chapter 2 . 6/14/2007
Very funny please update!
| DarklightZERO chapter 2 . 4/16/2007
This is funny. Just like the type of humor in the RvsB episodes. All of them screaming was funny.
The problem is I havent watched the later episodes of the pokemon anime, (all those filler episode) but reading on good ol' Wikipedia should solve that.
Burying your own skeleton? Thats just as illogical as being beaten to death with your own skull.
Just keep to this story and don't start making other versions. Please
Untill next time, Farewell.
(adds story to story alert list)
| alatnet chapter 2 . 4/9/2007
OMFG THIS IS FUNNY!
| internet weaver chapter 2 . 3/11/2007
You know...where's Sarge? And why wouldn't Church just get the body out of the armor...and then get into the aforementioned armor?
| SpartanCommander chapter 2 . 3/10/2007
good chapter. I hope you continue this...Please...
| hobofragr chapter 2 . 1/8/2007
good story and creativeness. love how you keep the RvB characters they way they should be. not sure about the pokemon ones seeing as i dont watch that but its all good
| OEDragon chapter 2 . 12/18/2006
Nice job so far! Keep them coming!
| Meitantei Kudo KID chapter 2 . 12/16/2006
I'm liking this!
The characters are in character!
| Tizami-Ki chapter 2 . 12/11/2006
AWSOME! Love it! This is great. You have a great fic. going here. RVB ROCKS! Keep it up!
| Lt Gravemind chapter 2 . 12/10/2006
Extremely funny crossover so far.
I'm guessing that this is after Ash and Misty leave Brock, or before they meet him?
| ZealousReformer chapter 2 . 12/10/2006
Ew...That does kinds go against all laws of nature, burying your own body.
Sure I'll Beta-read.