Reviews for The Hero's Path 1: The Cursed Ruby |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. I love it! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice first story. I like this a lot. YOu write really well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey great chapter update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey great chapter update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey great chapter update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey great chapter update soon |
![]() ![]() Can't wait to see the next episode. Hope you can finish your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good. |
![]() ![]() You totally need to post the next Episode. The series will be awesome when it's finished xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait a second ...I read this story before quite awhile ago but left no review ! I found the story amusing when Luke ended up on Earth . But he seems way OC , but that's to be expected considering his changing situations and environments. |
![]() ![]() Good story! I can't wait for the sequel! |
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![]() ![]() Cool twist! Loving the story so far! |
![]() ![]() LOL! Luke on 2005 Earth was very,very funny. Your writing style again really seemed to add a lot to this chapter, and Luke's personality seemed spot on. Of course, with RotS in the theaters, I don't blame Mack for not believing him. Who wouldn't? Really nice chapter, loved it a lot, and even laughed at some parts. Can't wait for Ch.6, and maybe the wizard will actually explain a bit, or at the least, get Luke off the island without Lenson killing him. Stupid Lenson, I don't like him. -Lunar |
![]() ![]() Hey! I just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this so far. Your writing style isn't what I normally see, but that's a good thing. It adds to the story, and in a very amusing way at that, and I like that. What's up with that ruby? How it it 'cursed', and how did this 'wizard(is it a jedi? Some people in the OT called jedi that.) person end up living here, and he a ruby guardian, just a crazy old guy, or something far more supernatural? Guess we'll see. All things in a story have their place. Love Luke's character by the way. |