Reviews for Warmth
Random Mongoose chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Too cute! And I think they were in character as well as they could be given the plot :D
JaliceLove chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
haha Nicee... It wasnt that OOC :] I personally loved the ending xD
Jenny chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
love the ending :)
village girl no. 3 chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
lurvely just lurvely...your graammar was very good and your descriptions and dialugue were very realistic
FlowersRcute chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Nice... You kept the characters in-character, which is always appreciated. The story is interesting, clean, and just darn cute!

Thanks a lot, keep writing! :)
yoyogurl chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
KAWAII! I loved it!
Vampire Muffins chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
cute
xciv chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
that IS original... keep up the good work! :)
Yonboy86 chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
lol cute, liked the last bit (like everone else)

personaliteis were bad (not bad at all) wish it was a bit longer
jeano chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
“I wanted to bring the color back in your face.”

LOL to that! Yay for cute fic (:
LaZ Chaos chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
Actually...that was pretty good in their personality. “I wanted to bring the color back in your face.” I could just see him saying that!
kenseikan weirdo chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Ah! Perfect! Seriously...It's more likely they're gonna act like this than not...anyways...it's fanfiction..OOC is alright...love your style of writing...can i expect any more ShikaIno fics from this great author?
suzako chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
aww, that was lovely. Liked it a lot
woofyy chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
LOL! how cute! when ino pulled shikamaru close to her again ... did it mean that she kissed him back? anywhos, good luckies with your future stories!
Delightful-Indeed chapter 1 . 12/1/2006
That was really good and it was original really original i like the blanket thing.
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