Reviews for The Possession
Theskyatdawn2 chapter 33 . 4/22
Some spelling and sentence structure problems, but a great write, dear lady. Your story, detail and plot structure was very well thought out. Outstanding character development also. I will say I have u and this story in my favorites
Guest chapter 33 . 3/22
isara-love chapter 27 . 8/11/2017
I love your storytelling, you did well. I love this pair
Thank you
SeraNeko-chan chapter 33 . 6/11/2017
Absolutely brilliant! You've spun a tale worthy of being called the sequel to the Labyrinth. May the late Mr. Henson be blessed indeed for giving us a wonderful and more realistic fairytale and the late Mr. Bowie as well for bringing our beloved Goblin King to life and giving many young girls their first crush.
Guest chapter 33 . 3/25/2017
Could you please write a squel to this story
lykiana chapter 7 . 1/23/2017
Marg narrowed her eyes on the King. "More likely it hoped you'd grow up in that time!"
Thanks for making me laugh out loud after the tears during the last chapter.
Guest chapter 33 . 12/19/2016
If AnnMarie was your editor, then I suggest she learns the English language a lot better than she has evidenced it in these pages.
Guest chapter 30 . 12/19/2016
"The smalls"? You do know that that means underwear?
Guest chapter 26 . 12/19/2016
It's Titania, not Tatiana.
Julissa chapter 18 . 12/19/2016
You might want to give credit to Blackmore's Night for the lovely song lyrics. Otherwise people might think you plagiarized and stole them...
Guest chapter 7 . 12/19/2016
"Thou", not "thee" as second-person nominative. "Thee" is the object, not the subject,
Julissa chapter 6 . 12/19/2016
Working my way through your wonderful stories. You really need a proofreader, badly. Jareth is such a jerk.
o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 9 . 8/31/2016
I really like that dream Sarah had, makes me want to have one like it. The children are also very cute :3 Thank you for this chapter :)
o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 8 . 8/31/2016
; ; So touching. Don't be cruel to her anymore Jareth! Also glad all that was explained. Very good chapter, thank you :)
o0SapphireMyst0o chapter 7 . 8/30/2016
Wow, I wonder what all that entails. Guess I will have to read more. Nice chapter, thank you :)
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