my dear you are a breath of fresh air to my mind and its occupants, I thourghly enjoyed your tail as it brought me to tears and laughter over its expanse I thankyou for your talent and how it has effect your readers and hope to see more from you in the future.

Beautiful. This was a wonderful story. Thank you!

Hee Hee!

Another great line "funny how some women prefer the dragon to the knight" :-D LOVE IT!

"She doesn't strike me as being all that intelligent"...HA!

There's the Sarah we know and love!

Loved this: "For your information, Lord Garthon, the only person in this Kingdom who has power to say should I stay or leave is the King. Take it up with him." She opened the door and glared at the guards, "Get the hell out of my way you bunch of toy soldiers."

YES! I bow to your excellence! This is perfect! And you have to love that scene in the movie...it is the best scene of all!

You brought me to tears again...you are wicked! (But in a wonderful way... ;-D)

I am absolutely loving this story! I love your interpretation of Jareth and Sarah. I love Candon and Marg-ALL of the characters are so real and it is easy to feel their backstories. I have never cried at a fanfic before, and you had me bawling for the last three chapters! The characters have come to life for me and I can't put this down. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter!

This is a lovely story, I enjoyed it very much!

EXCELLENT! WONDERFUL STORY! I love it!

Have a basket of cookies, you wonderful, wonderful writer!

This chapter made me cry! So sad! But so good!

-cries some more-

Darn you and your epic writings!

I love you. I love this story. I love your concept, your style everything. I read it all in one day because it just drew me in so well! I loved it. Thank-you for writing it. I laughed and yes at a few spots you made my cry. 3

Keep being this awesome.

Oh man that was a bloody fantastic story! Wow! _ Had me laughing my tail-end off in many places and cooing in others and cheering still in yet more areas. ::laughs grinning:: Wonderful, just awesome. It's one of those very well written/thought out stories that you wish a movie maker would get a hold of and make a movie out of. ::chuckles winking:: The way you wrote out all the characters is just wonderful, especially all the side characters that maybe wouldn't normally get mentioned.

All of it's just fantastic work hun! _ I wish you much luck in your future writings! I can't wait to read more, especially of this sort! _~ ::waves:: Blessed Be!

I read this story in one day. I don't know your beta, but this story flowed well, had great descriptions and dialogue, and was well written. Alomst no mistakes in grammer, plot, or syntax. I normally don't like the darker Jareth, but you pulled it off perfectly without getting too dark or malicious. I have read every story you have written, and if I have not reviewed, it was only because I was supposed to be doing something else but I was too caught up in your story, and when it was done I had to rush to an appointment or get out a report at work! Your writings have inspired me to do the same, and I hope you never stop. Reading your work is very refreshing and enjoyable, you have a real gift. I'd read your stuff if you ever publish in main stream as well. Your toast to Jim Henson was also a nice touch! We all Miss Him! ~Tally