Wow. This has to be one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. And that's no joke. Absolutely amazing!

I read your story in just one day! XD I couldn't go to sleep before I finish this! For this day your story was the best of all Labyrinth fics that I've read. I only have one complaint... why did they cry so much in the beginning? Jareth sat and wept, Jareth saw her and cried... And so on. It was kind of weird and OOC... Oh and you didn't decribe Sarah when she became Fae. How did she change? You just wrote that she was beautiful and all. But all in all I enjoyed this very much! Thank you for writing this!

Please write a sequel! This was really great!

-Emma

I haven't reviewed this yet? I don't know what I was thinking, so here it goes:

Quite simply, this was a lovely and well-written read. The story pulled me in, and the plot kept me interested long after it got rolling. I also appreciate how original and believable this story was given a lot of the mediocre stories found in the Lab. fandom.

Thanks for a wonderful read!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, having read it in one night.

But one thing haunts me with all of your stories that mention Oberon and his wife.

You distinctly call Titania *Tatiana*, why is this?

I started reading Midsummer's Nightmare as I love the play Midsummer's Night Dream. But the mistake/interpretation of Titania's name caught me off gaurd.

The stories are quite masterful, most deffinately this one. But I just can't get passed that ONE fault...

Answer if you will. But otherwise I did enjoy this story.

Mistress scribe, Lady PaisleyRose, You have the most wonderful stories. This one had me in tears for most of the first half of your tale. You are right in stating that Jim Henson was a master of tales, his love of fantasy will be sorely missed. It takes writters like yourself and others like you to help keep the magic alive. I am a believer in magic of all kinds. May the faeries bless you.

Oh, I should NOT have enjoyed this story as much as I did.

Okay, I'll be honest... the first few chapters, I was saying 'What the heck?' over and over... but it was so well-written I had to read more, and before long the tale drew me in and wouldn't let go. You kept me up far too late just so I could finish this. 3 My parents would kill me if they knew I was up at this hour, let alone using my laptop.

Without a doubt, this is one of those gems you occasionally find on this site, and they're getting harder and harder to find now. Well written, beautiful plot, just serious enough but with a touch of humour (I practically had a siezure at the first flirting scene I was trying so hard not to laugh out loud). Wonderful, absolutely wonderful.

Now I just have to hope that any other Labyrinth stories you've written are even HALF as good as this one, and I'll be happy.

I cannot sing your praises enough. xD I'm recommending this to all of my friends (or at least, the ones that have seen Labyrinth).

I loved it.

oh I thoght there was one more chapter. Well, I really enjoyed reading your story. One of the best I've ever read. I c what you mean about might needing a box of tissues, the ending was like a Hallmark moment fae style. The last two chapters were so sweet I was smiling and felt like crying a lil. Bravo girl.

Sarah kicked ass. Loved the showdown, Sarah owned it. everything was wonderful.

This chapter was so great! Omg the queen, I was sorta in shock the whole time she was talking, talk about a plot twist. Nanny is gone yippii, about time Jareth canned her. And, haha the Jacket Garthon gave Jareth with the spells didnt work! yay. Adele is so dumb, when is it going to click inside her head that no one likes her, especially Jareth? O I like the vary end with Sarah making a grand appearance to the ball and totally upstaging Adeles entrance. lol good job!

HI! This chapter was fun to read. It was fast paced and had a lot of interesting stuff happening. Lady Adele is an idiot, all beauty and no brains. I think Jareth should have been more careful and had Deven or someone around to guard Sarah. I thought Sir Didymus was? And Garthon has a wife? Seriously, what woman would want to be chained to him? lol. Nanny needs to be slapped and demoted. Oberon! I love how he was the one to come to Sarah's aid! He's really cool too. Why he married Jareth's stepmother? Looking 4ward to Adele's reation when she realizes the "mortal girl" is loose hahahaha. Good Job!

cool chapter. I love the ending line " funny how some girls prefer the dragon to the prince". Yes Jareth u are kinda like a nightmare but the best one ever!

UGH Garthon needs to jump off a cliff! He is soo annoying! I loved the part where Deven was taunting the king while he was "occuppied" .

.."if she 's to much to handle ..I could..."

LOL I can just imagine Jareth's face when he heard that!

So are Jarehth and Sarah married unofficially? What exactly happened when they opened there souls to one another?

I am not sure where to start with this review, the main rean because I think this chapter is so wonderful. It was beautifully written and I was kinda entranced when I was reading. When Jareth found out Sarah was a virgin and realized what that ment I wanted to laugh and at the same time I felt sorry for him. Remember when I said I liked Deven but didn't really know why? Well, now I do. He is so great! Bravo to Deven for telling Jareth how much of an arse he is and standing up for Sarah. It was during that conversation that I felt like crying a few happy tears and than REALLY wanted to cry when Jareth talked to Sarah and was determined to FINALLY set things right with her. Poor Jareth, he got distracted at the end there didn't he? haha that part at the end I was like they're finally going to do it! YAY GO SARAH she seduced Jareth lol. Ausome really. WELL DONE

I found this chapter to be really interesting. It made me think, about a few things goin on. Ok so the chanceller planned the gala on the night of the eclipse, which in most stories is a night of signifigance. When he told Jareth, I thought the king would have been put on guard, more than he already is. Since Adele is planning to ensnare jareth the night of the gala I think she is going to use the eclipse to her advantage and jareth better watch out. Also I liked the back round history about the Goblin kingdom, it made every thing more in depth. Also, Jareth seems sensitive where is father is concerned, cuz when garthon mentioned him Jareth was taken aback. I loved the ending when Jareth said the lines fom the movie. Sarah really is obediant. I thought I should mention a typo to you. It's at the end right after Jareth says "and I will be yr slave" the word 'room' doesnt fit in the following sentence and it sounds odd. Just lettin you know. _