Adele is a cow and Garthon is a weasel. Jareth was smexy in this chapter, teasing Sarah like he does. They are so sweet together, and he SO possesive.I really like Deven 4 some reason, not sure why. The kings really on his guard but I kno Adele with help is eventually going to pull something real bad over on Jareth, scheming witch. I want to punch her, or I don't know, turn her hair green in her sleep. Haha. Great job!

Hola! Ok, I was very happy with the last two chapters for two reasons. 1)Sarah is finally changing imortal/ fae or whatever,Yay I have waited for that. Sarah is great in this story :) 2) Sarah totally stood up to that pumpass ass Garthon and owned it, Garthon didn't stand a chance. I was cheering for her right along side Sir Didymus.

By the way don't you think Sir Didymus looks more like a lil yippy dog than a fox in the movie? It took me awhile to b sure when I first saw it. lol well anouther winning chapter,no complaints. Stay cool.

well not much to say bout this chapter. I saw it coming, even the consort room, after I knew jareth would sooner or later...

I got yr reply's from my earler reviews. I'm happy u like them. I left so many I was thinking it might get on yr nerves, since some of them r long. I keep in mind the warning gave about the turn the stories going to take. sigh, not all fairy tales can be nice and happy, especially with jareth as the leading man. Thanks 4 replying P.S. STORY ROCKS! ._.

I'm back to review another chapter. I'm so glad Sarah and the king have told eachother thier feelings and Sarah's not being aukward about it. The king is being so devishly sweet to her. When Adele went to give the potion to jareth I laughed, haha the witch didn't know the king and his "mortal girl" were already bonded! After the joke jareth and Sarah played on Garthon and Adele I have a feeling things are about to hit the fan. I really liked the song Sarah Sang, very pretty. Is that a real song or one u cleverly created? In my head I made fun of Adele so bad when she couldn't sing, and even having a golden flute didn't make her sound any better. Goes to show u can have the best of everthing and still be the worst. But I'm one to talk, I can't sing at all, I happen to think cryin kittens sound better than me lol.

haha Adel and Garthon are pissed! This chapter was a lot of fun to read. my favorite part was where Sarah was using Little red riding hood to flirt with Jareth lol " are you comparing me to a wolf" lol he always reminded me of a wolf actually.

Oh how I hate that women! lol Adel is a nasty piece of work, but im sure the Sarah will put her in her place. So the King's domestic future is being "looked after", hm..

I thought that sarah us part of the Labtrinth or whatever that she would some how become imortal or powerful or something? the same with Toby. Diddn't jareth sa that Sarah isnt completly mortal? Well, I guess I need to read on and see what happens. Very good chapter. I like there being one character that I can REALLY hate. lol

AUSOME. finally, Jareth does something. Now Sarah's life won't be so bland and gloomy. That part at the end was hot.

I'm sirprised that the children have gotten so used to thier new lives. Toby was very quick to accept the goblin king as a father after having just lost his real one. It's like he forgot about his old life completly all except for Sarah. still, good story. _

I really like how u made the labyrith living and thing. I could just picture that whole scene. Especially when it whined lol.

well, Jareth is the underground's biggest jerk, while coincidently being it's king. I feel sorry for his kingdom lol. Reading this I feel so bad for Sarah, but who wouldn't. I had a feeling she was clos to trying to end it, but I knew jareth would save her. He can't live with out her, as always. I'm hoping Sarah will have anouther premonition about someone soon. I loved the idea of her being able to dream about the future.

I found a typo in this chapter. When jareth says "Quite" instead of "Quiet" Nothing big I know. Anouther wonderful chapter though.

Teak is so cute! never thought i would say that about a goblin lol. I hope sarah is better by the next chapter. Your story rocks.

wow, Jareth holds a gudge huh? At least he saved her, and he still cares abot her even though he doesnt want to admit it to himself. What a good healer candan is! He's a tough elf for standing up to the goblin king. and on to the next chapter...

Very interesting beginning, I really like it so far. Can't wait to read about Jareth's reaction. Sarah has a power, how cool is that? It is dark, but awesome. Poor sarah. you really made her into the hero, Which I like. I think you depicted jareth's world and all the creatures in it really well, and you made sure to give them personality. Great Job. On to the next chapter than.

I absolutely LOVED this. You write wonderfully and it's captivated me so, that I read the entirety of this over the span of today.

Your last author note left me teary! Everything that was said... my sentiments exactly. Jim Henson was a wonderful man and I'm pleased that you credited him as you did :)

I applaud you and your work on this lovely story

Happy Writing, God Bless,