Normaly I fo not liek when Women is at the mercy of the man.

Also aknowledging something like: "I am yours." But I think I understand your way of viewing things.

You see it very patriarchatic. Men save women, men claim owmen, men keep women... I just do hope you will picture Jareth more in way like he owns her, but to protect her, to be gentle towards her, to "bath" her i hapiness.

But atleast you give Sarah support. His father. Building such "alliance" is very soothing. :-)

now really...aw...once again...aw ;_; very lovely.

(arent you tired of my praise?)

YAY! Tempered Sarah is back! yeah! Gave it to Garthon really mannerlike :D

Hey, you create such nice scenes, little moments of teasing conversation...even if nothing really "happens" it is really intimate.

I love it.

Oh, so this was the Pikas picture! I was wondering...

I loved the playing with the peach. :-

I am lacking of words...hm...

I just read on.

:D *glee* wonderfull! pulling the motives from movie.

I really enjoy reading this!

:D *glomps you* ...*sparkle eyes on you* :D I love it, how sweet it enfolds from misery to better path.

I also like the unspoken effect he has on other...Jareth as King. You certainly give him flair. :D

I read on ;-)

Hm. I confess I do not like this developement. I mena the sotry is good, but I cannot make myself to like Jareth acting like this.

But I remember reading somewhere in some other fanfiction, that Sarah cannot expect anythign other like Jareths behaviour. Since he is a King. With all those consequenzes. :-

sigh.

I read on. ;)

I am really so fond of your Jareth whihc loves the kids. :-

*trows you a caramel candy*

Sigh. :- (have nothing better to say)

Yes!...ehm..once again..YES! aah that felt good! HA!...I am beeing mean now, but he really deserved it.

“More likely it hoped you’d grow up in that time!”

I am startign to like your theories more and more. :)

I read on.

(I am having trouble to express myself consious and not repeating myself...I am sorry for such weak reviews :( )

Madonna mia...I dont know, but I really am looking forward how the story will progres... There has to be something, since this is really walking in circle.

Its really angsty and very...hm...powerfull in descripting pain and sorrow. To admit, I am not very sure of Jareth. to be hurt ok, but so?...she was 15. Anyway I understand it is freedom of the autor, so I will not pout.

I am still enjoying it. ;-)

I read on.

I have nothign grate to say, but I like it and find interesting you are making goblins so loyal to her...atleast few ones.

It creates a nice cuddly feeling around heart. :)

Very good you reaosned why he didnt appear to take her. I kept asking myself, but you explained it well.

This is really interesting. Burned Sarah. Hm. I think you are comming up with quite new ideas in this fandom. I am enjoying it!

Thanks for chapter!

I read on.

You know, when I first started reading tis I wasn't overly thrilled over it; the style is a little different than most of the thigns you usually find on . I actually thought about stop reading but I'm so glad I didn't! After only a few chapters I grew to love the way you phrase things, and the way you've structured the story. At that point I was helplessly caught in the fantastic web of a fanfic that you wrote and read for god knows how many hours straight.

Anyways, just want to say this was a magnificent read and you deserve high praise.

Incredible story! I've read others, and i love them all :)

I just noticed two mistakes you keep making:

quite/quiet (this can be typos, but it happens a lot). QuiET is an adjective: "she spoke quietly" whilst quiTE is used like: "this is quite nice"

And power room - if you mean the ladies room (which you seem to) it's powDer room. (that mistakes occurs all the time in "the wished away child")

Anyway, this is my review for all your stories, otherwise you'd get the same review all the times. Great writting!

' “My Daddy,” Toby peeped round Sarah at the man kneeling before her.

“My Son,” Oberon winked at The High Queen.

“My god! You are all insane!” '

That was so Shakespearean, omg. Best lines ever.