Reviews for The Possession |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely brilliant! You've spun a tale worthy of being called the sequel to the Labyrinth. May the late Mr. Henson be blessed indeed for giving us a wonderful and more realistic fairytale and the late Mr. Bowie as well for bringing our beloved Goblin King to life and giving many young girls their first crush. |
![]() ![]() Could you please write a squel to this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Marg narrowed her eyes on the King. "More likely it hoped you'd grow up in that time!" Thanks for making me laugh out loud after the tears during the last chapter. |
![]() ![]() If AnnMarie was your editor, then I suggest she learns the English language a lot better than she has evidenced it in these pages. |
![]() ![]() "The smalls"? You do know that that means underwear? |
![]() ![]() It's Titania, not Tatiana. |
![]() ![]() You might want to give credit to Blackmore's Night for the lovely song lyrics. Otherwise people might think you plagiarized and stole them... |
![]() ![]() "Thou", not "thee" as second-person nominative. "Thee" is the object, not the subject, |
![]() ![]() Working my way through your wonderful stories. You really need a proofreader, badly. Jareth is such a jerk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like that dream Sarah had, makes me want to have one like it. The children are also very cute :3 Thank you for this chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ; ; So touching. Don't be cruel to her anymore Jareth! Also glad all that was explained. Very good chapter, thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I wonder what all that entails. Guess I will have to read more. Nice chapter, thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've experienced that kind of dark abysmal despair... It's not something anyone can fathom unless they've been through it themselves. Poor Sarah... Heart wrenching and well written, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have noticed that you lean slightly toward the melodramatic side, which us okay with me. Bad Jareth, bad! Good chapter, thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Hoggle! Stand up to that uppity king! Oh Sarah... Very nice chapter! Thank you :) |