That was absolutely splendiferous! Another absolutely fabulous read.

"This kingdom is only big enough for one spoiled brat, and that would be me."

Probably the best line ever. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing. Well, I'm off to read the rest of your works. You are truly brilliant and gifted.

Blessed Be,

~ Omi-sempai

That... was brilliant. The plot was highly engaging, the characters stayed canon, and the new characters were believable. I'm going to have to go and watch the movie again, something I've not done in years. Thank you, thank you, thank you for the wonderful read, and bless you.

I LOVED YOUR STORY~!~ you are so awesome, wonderful twistin'

KEEP WRITING

Rosie

I can't say HOW MUCH I love you and your works; they're absolutely fabulous! However, one thing that's irritating the heck out of me is that you keep calling Oberon's wife Tatiana (you did it in Crystal Dreams, too). But her name is Titania! It would be great if you could correct it; if not, it's good for future knowledge!

This happens to be the first story I've read in a long time that's made me actually cry - I can count on one hand how many have made me actually cry and this is one. The emotion is just so real. Excellent job.

your story was absolutely incredible!

if possible, i definately think you should seek coyright permission from the jim henson company and have this published! it is an incredible, unexpected new story of the labyrinth full of creativity and twists! i love your writing style and adore the story. in fact, i just finished reading it and am about to start all over again!

good luck with any future projects, and thank you for this excellent piece.

I love this one very much.

I have no other words to express how much I enjoyed this telling.

Thank you so much for shareing this inspired writing with us.

HAHAHAHAHA!

This was fantastic.

the scene in the bedroom doorway was superb.

YAY!

This story makes me giggle. I am glad I don't have to cry anymore.

Fear Me.

Love Me.

GAH!

hehehehehehehehehhe...

I do I do...

hehe.

and her handling of that dink chanselor at the end of the chapter was GREAT!

HEHEHAHAHAHAA!

Oh yes. I saw the picture that was created with the throne scene in mind... It was delicious.

I loves it.

Heh. There's always someone plotting to take his throne and get rid of the goblins. This time, it's his own chanselor. How rude of him.

LOL

swet. I love this Jareth.

For each chapter I am feeling compelled to comment. The initiation into the fairy family was beautiful, and I am so very greatful that Jareth didn't suddenly turn into Monster Jareth, and destroy her peace.

Wonderful story.

Simply wonderful.