That was fantastic! I'm so glad Jareth put his head on straight in the end. Awesome job!

...Dammit. I keep forgetting to not read this story before bed. TT It always makes me cry, and then my nose gets stuffed. .

Ah, but it's so good! ヽ(ー)ﾉ

That was bloody brilliant! "I'll have your ovaries for breakfast." That was perfect! You are amazing. I found this through deviant art and I'm glad I read this.

I really adore this story! It's one of the best I've read so far~ Now, if only I could find a copy of the movie to watch...

I came across this story...I think someone at Deviant Art linked to it, I can't remember. But can I say, I stayed up most of the night to read the whole thing? Lovely, lovely tale.

Thank you so much!

Its over? NOOOOOOOOO! This has been one of the best Labyrinth stories I have read in a long time (and thats saying something since its sort of an obsession of mine). Thankyou so much for showing both Jareth and Sarah in a more "natural" light and not making them overly dark or whinny. This story sucked me in from the start and I can honestly tell you it will be in my dreams for many nights to come. Thank you for writing it with just that touch of seductiveness without making it raunchy [not that there is anything wrong with that now and again ;)] and for the wonderfully warm and fuzzy make you want to squeal and do a happy dance ending. I am a big fan of your fiction, and this story does nothing but reinforce that. Thank you once again for the fantastic trip back to the Labyrinth and the romantic tale that brought two of my favorite characters together where they belong.

I love the tale you have spun, rich with faery lore and flavoured strongly of the classic Victorian novels and your music choices, particularly The Faery Queen by Blackmore Nights

I love your Tatiana and Oberon, that both are revealed as loving parents and not wicked and nasty like Adele and Garthon.

Hm. Hmmm. Not sure how I feel about this one. I did enjoy it, especially the last few chapters. You made Adele and Garthon quite easy to hate, and seeing their fall was very gratifying. You're also talented with the risque scenes. The thing is, when I think of how Jareth treated Sarah here, namely in the beginning, the image that comes to mind is a boot crushing and grinding glass into a carpet. So I totally understand Sarah's personality switch to being so pathetic and supine, and I also liked and understood her climb out of that hole, as she got some fire back and gained some influence over the king. Good job. Just... god, Jareth was such a dick. I never did get the impression he deserved her or her love, and it's slightly unsettling that, in the end, she's still his chattel.

At least, in practice, she probably won't be. But yikes.

On the other hand, for a feminist like myself to enjoy a story with these themes as much as I did, it must mean it's really well-written! I'll have to call it a guilty pleasure. ;)

Wow...wow just wow what a story I was absolutely hooked. I think this is the best fan fic I've read. I can't find anything bad about it (except a few niggly spelling mistakes but I'm a bit OCD about that tbh so I can forgive those). I loved your portrayals of the characters especially I think they were so loyal to the original characters it almost felt as if this could have been an official sequel or something.

So yeah gushing with praise for this and I have a huge urge to watch Labyrinth again now so I shall bid you adieu

very good!

i loved every minute of it.

looooved this story

Easily one of the best. Laby fics on ffn. A few grammar and spelling mistakes. But all in all an extraordinarily well spun tale. A

"Work what girl to death?" He closed his eyes ignoring the woman.

Marg ripped the riding crop from his fingers and began thrashing his legs with it. "You know very well what girl! Sarah."

WTF is wrong with Jareth?

This was fanTASTIC. Stayed up way past my bedtime and couldn't finish it so finished it this morning. Loved Tatiana & Oberon there at the end - excellent touch.

Interesting take, and Jareth's "game" being more real than even he wanted to acknowledge was well done. Also adored Marg & Vatel (and wee Teak!) - excellent OCs.

Thank you for sharing this - it was a truly lovely read.

Aww, Teak!

Interesting start, looking forward to where this goes...