Reviews for Life and Death: the King in Danger
Lamppostshines chapter 2 . 8/18/2007
Okay, so I used to write like this so I know...about those other reviews. Later
Feafea chapter 4 . 12/2/2006
juz a curious question, how old are you? you need not tell mi your exact age if you feel uneasy to. juz a rough gage. though i dont suppose you are more than 12 right? if so, not a bad fic! practice makes perfect.
Sarahbarr17 chapter 2 . 12/2/2006
I am enjoying this story very much, but there are a few things that are anachronistic about this chapter:

1. "she looked at the time and it was 4.30 in the morning"? It sounds like arwen has a digital clock. They didn't express time like this in Middle Earth.

2. "Hey, what's up?" - this is modern language.

Hugs,

Sarah x

Sarah x