Reviews for SunKissed Flakes
Jealous Jack chapter 16 . 11/30/2015
Awwww where's the rest? This is the biggest hangcliffer ever!
Guest chapter 11 . 10/5/2015
Ed likes milk...

Someone HAS to draw Ed as a little kid clutching Roy's leg, making an adorable terrified face whispering "Monsta..."
Guest chapter 6 . 10/4/2015
DraconoBlade chapter 16 . 9/7/2013
I really wish that it was finished... Maybe you could finish it one day? That would make me so happy. But I understand that as a writer, sometimes leaving things unfinished forever is perfectly normal. But, who knows? Maybe you'll look back on this story one day and think 'Hey, I should finish this.' Anyways, great story, I really love it!
PollenPawprints chapter 16 . 4/13/2013
Awww! Thhis whole story has been one fluffy ball of kawaii! I LOVE it!
LeFay Strent chapter 6 . 1/31/2013
Hm, I suppose some people would think Riza was being almost bitchy towards Ed, but I can kinda see where she's coming from. She's always been protective of Roy, and now she sees him using this new Ed as a substitute for the old one and he's become quickly attached to him to. I can see where she's coming from.

This is a nice little story you've got here. The only thing it's lacking is description. Sometimes I can't tell where the scene is taking place because you haven't really explained where they're at or what the area looks like. Also, I'm a little confused about how Ed looks. At first i thought he was a straight up kitten. But then everyone who sees him seems to immediately recognize that its him or that he's a chimera. So does he have some humanistic features or something? Anyway, I really like the way you write him and Roy together. They're too cute. X3
TheQueenOfScouts chapter 16 . 6/15/2012
Interesting story, I hope you'll continue it someday. :3
Violent Solution chapter 3 . 9/15/2011
letmeupme chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
I hope to post a fuller review one day, but I just wanted to say that this fic is wonderful. The atmosphere, the settings of the fic are well laid, the feel is very different from the original; a good thing in this case.

Subtle, stark, warm, and surreal in a way that feels real.

Thank you for writing and posting 'Sunkissed Flakes'
VioletIsInPain chapter 3 . 2/24/2010
i love this story! its very...CUTE!
love-peace-music chapter 2 . 6/29/2009
im not quite sure i understand this,is Edward a kitten or a half kitten/half boy?
lilsammywinchester chapter 16 . 1/2/2009
i think this story is so cute! 3 er i didn't really understand the little short thing u left though

(and i feel like so slow lol it took me a while to figure out that Ed wasn't a normal kitten in the beginning xD)

well this fanfic is cute and i hope u continue it! D
deadforever chapter 16 . 8/16/2008
Me: Oh updated! O.O;

Lust: ...whooptie-friggin'-doo.

Wrath: _' Is it just me...or is somebody starting their PMS a little too early?

Lust: *glare*...

Envy: Watch it, she bites. *smirks*

Wrath: ...hunh?


Me: ALL OF YOU SHUT UP! *glares at the sins* How come everytime I review this story, all of you guys wanna take over on my computer?

Greed: *shrug* Beats me.

Sloth: Actually, all of us are tired of hearing Envy griping and complaining about stupid fangirls, annoying nicknames, and hardly ever being used in fanfics unless it's a b/l story or something yaoi-ish. It's quite halarious, considering the fact that Envy isn't gay.


Wrath: *smirks* who's the one PMSing now?

Envy: *points* SHUTTUP!

Me: *sniggers* ...anyways, what I've been meaning to say is that I'm glad you were able to update, even if the chapter was incredibly short. o_o' I was actually a little disappointed when I found that it was super-duper short, because I wanted to read more chapters from the awesome writer, Momma Mustang! I'm not sure if I added you to my author's or story(ies) alert list yet, but I think I'm going to now.

Keep writing!~

Envy: *is reading chapter*...dammit. There's still nothing about me in here.

Greed: ...

Lust: ..

Wrath: Look's like someone has a really big ego. XD

Envy: ...

Me: ..?

Envy:. ... *shifty eyes* _


Envy: ...*sulks and leaves computer*...shut up, bitch.
michelle chapter 16 . 8/9/2008
i love the story its really cute! is the last chapter so posed to a flash back before he meet roy or is it where you left off on? anyway good work! your really good i love the story a lot and ed is so cute and every thing keep up the good and update soon;)
mrawgirl09 chapter 16 . 7/18/2008
like, oh my god. tanks so much for the reply, although i have no idea what you were talking about, and now i have to reread it all over again! but i don't really mind, cause the first chap, with the title, is burned in my mind! i really, REALLY loved the box kitty, and i'm sure i'll always remeber it! u tata!
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