Reviews for Nayru's Secret Plan
flavio-sexual chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
HOLY CRAP! THIS IS... I DONT UNDERSTAND HALF OF HOW THI IS WRITTEN... ALL i understand is that Zelda is with child and she"s married... that sucks for Link...
lmar3607 chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
I sent a pm to you that I published my story but i decided to tell you on here too just in case i havnt checked up on my story yet so i dont know if youve reviewd yet (i looked at the draft and saw i messed up sum stuff but ill have that fixed.)anyway hope u like it.
YUKIECLAIR chapter 39 . 1/17/2012
wonderful I waited this chapter and finally some of my questions have been answered, i can't wait to see what link and zelda will say to each other, that is the part I'm waiting since I began to read this wonderful fic, please link show up! WTF are you doing! XD

love it continue XD
lmar3607 chapter 38 . 1/16/2012
I liked this chapter i hope everyones ok...Where the heck is Link he would of well...destroyed Bryal...hes an overprotective but its sweet.(like dodongo's cavern) and did Leia lose her glided sword?and if im right bryal's 'master' is ganondorf (boy, before we know it there'll be a mob of people wanting Leia dead cuz of her parents or title)i cant wait for the next chapter!
nice job chapter 37 . 1/10/2012
I think it's good but needs little work, update soon
James Birdsong chapter 37 . 1/5/2012
Hoorah for your story
Akari Chou chapter 36 . 1/4/2012
I know this is a little late but Happy New Year and the reason i don't have the story posted is cuz my internet keeps screwing up ( dont you think its a little anoying wen stuff like that happens?)Ive been readin' hero's angel to keep me busy till the next chapter is up and ive been meaning to say this: you and your cuz anime wildfire are phenomenal writers and you guys come up with lots of great ideas for fan fic! :) well ill talk to you up the great work !
Kenny Trash chapter 33 . 12/29/2011
What the F# % just happened! Ok so first of all, where is Link when all of this is happening!Two, did Impa just try to comint , were they in castle town and thats where Impa tryed to kill her self. And lastly, what was Impa , and I almost forgot, DID ADEN JUST JUMP THE REST OF THE WAY TO THE CASTLE UP TO ZELDA'S BEDROOM WINDOW!I love the story, but sometimes its just confusing.{Sorry if I miss speelt anything:)}
Kenny Trash chapter 11 . 12/28/2011
Um... did I miss something? Is it just inplide that Zeke was taken by Brayl because there's not a chapter for it and how could he have been taken, Sheiku gards Zeke at all times. How old is Leia? Also,if Leia is a few years older than her brother and is the child of Link, how is Zeke Links child as well?
The Epic Legion chapter 12 . 12/26/2011
Dont like short chapters, its like not reading anything at all...
The Epic Legion chapter 10 . 12/26/2011
You are good man...
The Epic Legion chapter 9 . 12/26/2011
So ka naaa... Looking forward to
The Epic Legion chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
this is interesting...
Could be better chapter 8 . 12/22/2011
While I found the plot of this story pretty interesting, the grammatical errors are taking a lot from the fun of reading it. In fact, I think I will be stopping by here.

I couldn't even get to the middle of chapter 8, as the erros are so frequent. Most are just mispelled words, such as "parinoied" (paranoid), but others make me wonder what happened when you typed, such as "soilgers" (soldiers)

Please, find a beta reader or at least give your texts a quick review before deciding it is done.

Other than that, your texts are well done, if not by a few coesion problems.
lmar3607 chapter 36 . 12/19/2011
This chapter was ...dylan is pretty creative if bryal is gonna act like a stingy toad hes gonna die like ...favorite villian...twinrova maybe,or bongobongo(my bro's favorite.).Please don't use a cliffhanger!Also the title of the fan fic is probably gonna be The Legend of Zelda:Heroes in Time like how i hav it on ZU.(im probably gonna stop posting there for my own reasons i was experementing on peoples reaction to it.)I got maybe 19 .Also do you have Skyward Sword?I got it4my B
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