Reviews for Metallic Thunder
xoVanilla-Bean chapter 1 . 6/26/2007 angsty...oh...O.o

I loved how you made it though. It reeaally wrenched my heart! I thought it was a beautiful one! :D

*skips off happily to read more stories*
mOOnlite-duskk chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
WOW, that was beautiful O

LOL..speechless YOUR GOOD *nods
Ryfee chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
aw O:

poor kaikai! sora just went *dead* like that? how cruel o_o

andand i like your descriptions about nameless nobodies and such and kairi's thought how sora could have been her someone really reversed everything. well done (:

nice work!

MCHLV; 3 felia.
ahnminh chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
Poor, poor Sora.

& Kairi too.

If only, if only.

Too bad this can't be

continued. Otherwise,

it might have had

a somewhat happy ending~
Kinpaginpa chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
Well I can say that I didn't expect that at all. My heart just about stopped when it mentioned a gun shot. But who doesn't love a depressing story every once in a while?
twilighttries chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
-dies- You... you killed Sora, you bitch. :( Absolutely amazing. So, so sad though. I loved it. Totally favoriting it. Very, very nice.
NobodyNParticular chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
I got the imaginary point though. Good oneshot.
FernClaw chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
FC; Ya know Kaiora, it could makw a really pretty name...

Fern: What are you jabbering about?
Yu207 chapter 1 . 12/3/2006


loved the way you wrote it

aww, and it was so cute, the way you described sora!

heh, just so like him :D

s2 it!
Namilaa chapter 1 . 12/3/2006

huh...i guess you weren't lying when you said you wanted to write a tragedy...

o.O; was really good, though

i was actually sort of scared to read it at first..

"Metallic Thunder"

-raises eyebrows-

ooh, how deathly of you


HAHAHA...i could so totally see you lying on your bed just staring at he ceiling; trying to think of something

well, actually i can't really say that because I don't know wat you look like so...i guess, i could imagine SOMEONE lying on their bed staring at the ceiling





i'll leave now

GREAT story ((sorta creepy ;D))

thanks fo' postin'


DPWolf chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Wow, this was...mildly depressing. XD And is it a bad thing that most of my fic ideas -which are typed but not posted thanks to my extreme procrasination- are from dreams I have? Heh...

Anyway, I liked this, even though it's kinda sad. I think pretty much all of my favorites list is made up of your, keep up the good work! :D

the-light-shines-within chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Aw that was so sad! Kairi should have held him back for a few more seconds! Then Sora wouldn't have gotten shot...well not really. Because you're the author and you can kill whomever you please, but still, that's my rational.
aquamarineee chapter 1 . 12/3/2006

I haven't reviewed any stories

for like a MONTH or TWO or THREE.

Aw I'm sory.

Busy busy busy.

Cause I found a new lover. :D


This was a sad oneshot.

But w0ND3Rful.

Ooh it was my birthday yesterday. Haha.
xxlovelycollision chapter 1 . 12/3/2006

{this is pure genius. that's what it is}

congrats, you're now one of my

many, many heroes.


{it's drop-dead gorgeous}

no lie.

[ LOVE ]
the general girl chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
So sad...
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