|Reviews for Second Chances|
| Arafell chapter 15 . 7/15/2013
Those Anbu. . . were idiots. lol
I probably would have let the Hokage do something rather than, you know, assault what i thought was the village-destroying Kyuubi.
| Potterformers chapter 14 . 7/10/2013
too bad Namikaze Minato is Naruto's father
| Lerris chapter 15 . 5/25/2013
This wasn't bad, but well, the story appears to be abandoned. I'd probably recommend removing most of 14 and then having Orochimaru die in this chapter. It would be perfectly believable and that way you could write an epilogue and call the story done, if imperfectly. The other thing that comes to mind is Naruto's actions against Kabuto. He should be too much of a professional to do stupid things like half transform and toy with his targets. That kind of thing gets allies killed.
| Lerris chapter 14 . 5/25/2013
This chapter was disappointing, while the previous were actually fairly good. The base I could sort of suspend my disbelief for, but Hinata and Shino doing Kage-Bunshin training in large numbers was out right just crazy. It is a kinjutsu for a reason. Without the kyuubi to keep his brains from turning to tapioca massive numbers of them would be deadly. Basically never write of a way to get ten years of training in a week. It just doesn't pass the believability test.
| Lerris chapter 11 . 5/25/2013
That was a good chapter...
| Guest chapter 15 . 4/17/2013
Hey great story dude when r u going to update again
| hawk chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
I got halfway through chapter one. I couldn't keep reading with all the grammar errors and misused words in place of proper words with similar sounds. Is English your second language? I'd suggest getting a proofreader. Your confession at the top of the story was a bit unsettling; specifically how you had taken from other stories, but I gave it a chance anyway. I thought it might be something good, but couldn't continue through all the glaring problems it still holds. If you improve your writing and come back to it, correct the problems, then it might shape up to be a good story.
| WJMDragonRider chapter 15 . 2/20/2013
great story. hope you plan on continue it soon.
| NaruHinaSometimes chapter 8 . 2/7/2013
| izyizy chapter 15 . 1/16/2013
You have written an amazing, original story, and I think it's high time you get off (or rather on, I should say) your ass and update. There are too many incredible, original, genius stories that were never finished. This right now is one of them, unless you continue it. Peace out.
| AmandaSingh0 chapter 15 . 12/22/2012
please update as soon as possible
| zigmas chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
I hate abandoned stories...
| xiao025 chapter 15 . 12/17/2012
i liked the story... i liked how naruto being strong and knowledgeable but i don't like how he acts what do you call that "pessimistic" i guess... Please UPDATE soon real soon because i wnt to know what will happened next... thanks...
| silentdove93 chapter 15 . 11/17/2012
I love this story. Seriously. Please, please, PLEASE update soon?
| NARUTO11 chapter 15 . 10/22/2012
this is a great story