Reviews for Promise of a lifetime |
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Korisen chapter 23 . 5/13/2008 Just read the authors notes at the beginning of ch. 23... The reason he didn't hit his head was because she was close enough to the wall, while he wasn't near it enough for it to work. That's why he said something along the lines of 'A ninja must know his surroundings.' |
KunochiDreamer chapter 50 . 5/11/2008 Good chapter. |
Hillarious Tragedy chapter 50 . 5/10/2008 you better update soon. like, sooner then soon. id hate to be all critical, but this chapter seems a bit rushed. but it may have to do with the fact that im exhausted, so i dunno. |
Hillarious Tragedy chapter 49 . 4/27/2008 why were you working on your next story if you arent even finished with this one yet! that isnt a good excuse to be extremely late! your lucky im not allowed to play with the knives anymore! *sigh* still, it was an interesting history lesson about the uchiha and everything else. just PLEASE try and update sooner! |
KunochiDreamer chapter 49 . 4/27/2008 Good chapter. |
Rebellia chapter 49 . 4/27/2008 That was an AMAZING chapter. My hands-down favorite part was the dialogue between Naruto and the Kyuubi (and the end, too.) That was very well done, and the writing matched the mood perfectly. The last sentence was great. Usually, I have more than praise to review about, but this time I only have one comment...there was one part where you talk about Sasuke wanting attention from his father and you say "Itachi hogged it all," which is kind of an out-of-place expression. But that's one little word, and it's all I could think of. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
Infernal Maelstrom chapter 49 . 4/26/2008 ehh i'm not sure whether you intended the fic to be this way but both Madara and his brother had the Mangekyou according to canon. Of course, this is your fic so whatever you say goes in your world |
Khellan Rafe chapter 40 . 4/10/2008 This story is getting better and better with each chapter! More intrigue, plot development and character interaction. And the cleanliness is getting better as well. I'll finish playing cath up tomorrow, and great job! |
Khellan Rafe chapter 31 . 4/9/2008 At this point hope seems slim for a NaruSaku but I'm still holdin out! Heheh, there's just somethin about that pairing... Great story! Hopefully I'll catch up the rest of the way soon. |
aaron chapter 48 . 4/6/2008 awsome story dude it is still one of my top 5. Love your up dates and keep it a-goin |
Khellan Rafe chapter 13 . 4/2/2008 Lookin forward to catchin up with this story. Really good so far, can't wait to see some major stompage. Later. |
Anonymous chapter 38 . 4/1/2008 I like the story. I just think you should have stopped when Sasuke actually returned home and started a new story from where that left off. |
nma1 chapter 48 . 3/31/2008 Great chapter! |
Justhere101 chapter 48 . 3/30/2008 Great story |
Bubblegumcrazed chapter 48 . 3/30/2008 "A littl rain never hurt anyone" hahaha! but alot might cause bloodshed! I feel like some sort of 'flood' pun or water joke should be thrown in somewhere. Thats alot of things going on! I actuly had to re-read it to get everything, that evil Itachi... he planed it from the start..I doubt even his partner is going to be there for long. |