|Reviews for Diaspora|
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/13
You should be proud of such a fine piece of work. Althea's struggles were very real and vivid throughout this story, as were Lynex's.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/13
Very interesting set up. Interested to see where you will take this.
| KHandFF7fanforever chapter 15 . 1/23/2011
WHAT! NO THAT CAN'T BE IT! at the beginning i thought she would have tried to fight to be Queen but then again she is human...(thou my opinion i think it would have been cool for her) Will the Lantean team ever understand her view points? what will happen to her if they captured her? Will there be a squeal to this one!
| AliceArkham chapter 15 . 1/17/2011
hope to see some more chaptures
| pegp chapter 15 . 8/3/2010
i was hoppin dat somehow she would end up becoming da queen and rule the hive
| Tilius chapter 15 . 7/7/2010
Liked the new chapter.
| Trent chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
No, beyond fantastic.
You've written a perfect story. Well done.
| Shanthaia chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
I realise I read and review this late, I just wanted to enjoy your awesome writing while I had enough time and did not have to rush :)
Thank you so much for finishing Thunder! I once again enjoyed reading your story very much - there is nothing I could critizise, it is perfect as it is. It was well worth the wait! Now I hope you may find time and the writing mood for outcast - I so wish I could read about warrior some more ;)
| daniel chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
i LOVE your wraith stories!
any chance for Outcast update? i loved this one so much :( i need more
| LantienLady chapter 15 . 2/13/2010
Thank you so much for finishing Thunder! Although you may not have first intended this story to end this way, it was totally believable. It made sense that the rivals would take the Hives off the planet, it made sense that the Atlantis team would not be needed, and it made sense that a final fight scene would be required to dispatch team Atlantis from the story. I really enjoyed the fight - how Ronon was so dangerous, how Teyla used her Wraith telepathy, and how Rodney ran interference. It is ironic that Sheppard caused Althea so much damage, when she was always so drawn to him. In the end, you revealed that Lynex never lost his love for Althea, attacking Sheppard in a rage that transformed Lynex in Althea's eyes as 'truly Wraith'. It was touching how Lynex showed his love for Athea by his actions, not words. Our heroine was very injured at the end of Thunder, and our hero was desperate to save her. The tie in to 'Lonely Divides' was very slick.
I look forward to you continuing the tale of Lynex and Althea. I would love to see them meet Todd! You have lots of possibilities, and am glad that you have time to write again for you loyal fans.
| Shiba-san chapter 15 . 2/9/2010
She died! Ah. I guess I'm still a sucker for happy endings. Great story!
| SGA-Seven chapter 15 . 2/2/2010
I'm glad you finished this story, I have enjoyed reading both this one and the one before it. You have left it so there can be more added to it. The Lantians were not shown in a good light here, it was a shame being older than both of them that Sheppard and co. couldn't get beyond their prejudices and help the young ones. But anyway, I really enjoyed this story and look forward to more stories with Althea and Lynex.
| tinkerswraith chapter 15 . 2/1/2010
An update, yeah :D THe last chap, sigh, bummer. BUT, what an awesome chapter. I was never happy with the Ronon character, and could have done with out him personally but now, grr. He needs to go.
After all Linex and Althea had been through, they get attacked by the Atlantis crew. Kudos to Rodney though.
I digress, though. Thank you so much for updating. I have missed this two and it would be great to see more character growth b/w them. I loved the one shot sequel and I would love to see what happens next, if you do write another sequel. So many possibilities :)
| female'wraith chapter 15 . 2/1/2010
You finished the story. I worried you will kill Lynex. The sequel will be welcomed:)
| WraithBubbles chapter 15 . 2/1/2010
It's finished! It's sad to think there won't be any more updates after this though...but maybe we'll see these two again? It was good how you connected this too Lonely Divides as well.
Oh well, looking forward to more.