|Reviews for Fallen|
| half of my life is reading chapter 35 . 8/11
Noooooo! Why a sister!
| half of my life is reading chapter 31 . 8/11
but... but...but... Kel and Alex!
| Lemn chapter 83 . 7/21
Thank you for sticking with this story and finishing it - and taking us along. Even if it had been years ago, your writing still gives people (me, for example) a ‚ jolly‘ place to hide from a bland reality.
| lemon chapter 10 . 7/18
those bloody idiots are making Kel into a cowaard who ran away instead of the hero who saved Lucie and killed the monster? And they have the GALL to feel generous about it?
Because they cannot admit that it's a mistake to force girls to be helpless and unable to defend themselves, or that there is shame in abusing, rather than in being abused?!
Sadly, I cannot say that any part of this is unrealistic, rather I fear you have hit the mark completely.
Patriarchy needs to DIE since apparently it turns people into victims and emotionally stunted assholes.
| Guest chapter 83 . 6/20
This is a sad review for what was an awesome adventure you took me on but I loved they whole thing.
| Kisa Darkhorse chapter 83 . 6/19
Not sure if anyone on the site is still active but I wanted to let you know I came back to her specifically for this story. I loved this story so much when I first read it over 10 years ago and I still love it now. I hope the years have treated you well.
| wolven4199 chapter 83 . 4/30
I rarely, and I do mean rarely, write reviews on this platform. I'm more of a silent lurker in that sense. But I have to say, this is one of the most well-written fanfictions that I have ever read. It reads like a story and you kept it all very believable in the Tortall universe. I commend you on a job well done! Also, as a veterinary student myself, kudos on finding time to try and keep up with this and for giving me a short escape from my studies.
| Lireanna chapter 83 . 4/3
I love this fiction! I read it at least once a year. it's so good! I like this one more than the original to be honest. it hits a little darker which I like as an adult.
would you be averse to me putting this in print so I can read it in a physical form,. just for me for personal use?
| Guest chapter 83 . 3/2
I know that the last chapter of this sorry was posted many years ago. However it is still one of the best works that I have read and will continue to reread. I hope all is well and that you are enjoying being a Veterinarian. Thank you for writing such an inspiring work of art.
| Guest chapter 83 . 3/2
Reading it now for the first time as a 42 yo. I loved it ! Thank you so much. Would love to see a fallen 2 with what happens next!
But even without that, thanks for taking the time to write. It’s lovely
| Xelababygirl chapter 83 . 11/29/2022
omg that was such a ride. I cried I laughed I was angry I was happy. such an amazing story. words do not do it justice. beautiful work
| Ember Q'wati chapter 83 . 11/26/2022
Just finished reading this, all in one go! Took about 10 hours but so worth it 3 Extremely compelling and well written! I hope you are doing well!
| Guest chapter 83 . 11/18/2022
Thank you for writing.
| CarpeDiemMay chapter 82 . 11/14/2022
I’ve lost count how many times I’ve read Fallen and every time I get thrown inside so far that I can see, hear, smell, feel and taste everything. The anticipation of what I now know is coming but I don’t want to read ahead because everything is just so good. It’s stories like these that I wish could be made into movies so I can immerse myself further into your vision but at the same time never want to happen because as we know, the book is always better than the movie (having to cut scenes, bad casting, etc).
I will come back to Fallen many, many, many times again in the future. I can’t even remember when I first found this and started reading but I know I’ve read it minimum once a year since I did. Maybe twice? Not sure. Sometimes such long stories throw me off because they can get a bit wordy or over done and you think “get to the fn point” because it’s so long drawn out but other than a few editing things here and there in regards to missing page breaks and misspellings, you’ve never had that problem.
Everything in Fallen flows perfectly, even if at times (mostly for first time readers) it seems it doesn’t. I would love to see Kels and Doms reaction to finding out she’s pregnant because I think it’d be hilarious… especially when Alex finds out too LOL but you ended it (again I have to use this word) PERFECT.
Thank you for writing a timeless piece that as I mentioned above, I will come back to, time and time again.
(I have likely left a review before and can’t remember but I’ll certainly try to leave something behind every time I do read it until I have posted something on every chapter and can no longer post a review on Fallen under my account anymore. Because then I’ll just have to log out and and make a ‘guest review’ LOLOLOL)
Ps… turns out I’ve already left a review on ch83 so here’s the next one lol. When I get down to ch1 I know it’s time to go to guest ;)
| half of my life is reading chapter 44 . 11/11/2022
I have god damned tears drowning me