Reviews for My brother is no Freak
Gothchampion chapter 1 . 8/21
i have five younger siblings so i understand
Chamcha chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
So true.. :3 luffy is smart and his crew always can count on him..
Wolf and MR Lover chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
It's kinda funny to read stories like these. You know, what with Ace being so nice and all. I understand that the rest of Luffy's back story wasn't shown until kinda recently, but I mean funny in a cute, bit refreshing way. It sure was a shock to all of us to see how violent - especially to Luffy - Ace was. Hahaha! :")
Madsouki chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
aww, brothership, I CRIED OVERTIME when Ace died. Poor Luffy...-.-
Nekoi Kurona chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Awwww... That was sooo cute; all that fluff warmed me up. I think that rubber is awesome too! So much potential and power and Luffy's genius ideas to make it useful (I seriously never knew that you can vulcanize rubber before Luffy demonstrated it...)
things24 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
I like this story, it shows the relationship older siblings have towards their younger siblings. It also shows how some people are afraid of people who are different and bully them for it.
roo17 chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Great story! loved it!
Perpetual Concern chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Hi!

No, I don't think that Ace got too violent. After all, Luffy is his younger brother and in my opinion they share a very close bond.

And anyway, just for the record, this fanfiction may be good in another way. You should never tease someone just because their different. I believe that this fanfiction really shows this and that's partly why I like it so much!

~MewPirate~
Ninja-Hito chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
I really enjoyed your story. It was so sweet and I know what you mean by being protective. I have a younger brother too and I know how Ace feels. Sorry about that - but I loved it and thought it was very well written.
RobotBee96 chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
I thought Ace was fine. :) It was a good story. I'd be that way too if someone picked on my little sister. I may most likely hate her but I'd still beat the crap out of anyone who bugged her.
Lunarangel's Dark Flame chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
*starts crying* It's so sweet and wonderful. You did great. Ace wasn't too violent at all. He was just being one of the big brothers in anime whose brother means a lot to him.

Also, you are incredibly right about Luffy. He's a little thick, extremely hyper but he's anything but dumb. That Drum Island arc got me right here *points to heart*. Even though he was hurt, frozen, he saved that poor bunny's mother even if it tried to kill him and when he got to the top, all he cared about was his friend's safety. He's so wonderful!

Back to your story, I think you captured Ace's reaction perfectly. I always think that Luffy was treated like that but we have to learn more. Anyway, you did great and sorry if this review's too long. Bai-Bai! Oh, one more thing, I must hug child Luffy! *hugs him*
damn-strait love maiden chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
i'm the eldest of three girls. and i have a story to tell.

i was in 7th grade and school had been out about 30min but, i had to get a book from the library. now this school isn't very big, in fact it only holds 250 students, so everyone knows everyone. i had got my book, locked up the library and, was getting ready to walk to my friends house when i heard crying and laughing. curious i walked around the corner to see my sisters being picked and beat on. now one of my sisters has downs and the other was just in 5th grade. these guys that were messing with them were in my grade. i was pissed. my sister was BORN that way she can't help it! before i even new what i was doing, i threw my moby dick at the boy closest to me. BA-TANG! right in the head! i then procieded(sp?) to throw the rest of my school supplies while cusing them out and punching any idiot that tried to stop me. i haven't had any trouble from them sense. of corse, i had other problems that week... *cough* *cough* pms *cough**cough*. anyways i think ace was pretty level headed in your story, portaying the character very well.

sorry for boring you.

rock-on,

~maiden
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
Sniff, Sniff! Budd that was so moving!(~Quote from Jhonny)
SebDaryus chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
; O; FLUFLUFFLUFFLUFF !

Uwaa~! ; .; I love this sappy brother fluff fanfic. *tear* Ace was DEFINATELY not too violent. Hell, in my opinion he should have beat the shit out of those little snotty brats ! XDD

I'm a younger sibling and I know I'd do the same or worse my sister, and.. well, actually my sister DID do that for me when we were younger! XDD We're both such saps for brother fluff... hahaha~!

Fantastic story, in all, it had me wibblin' all the way though. ; 3;
Creshiell too lazy to log-in chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
i'm a younger sibling and if that happened to older brother i'd be the same as ace (if not worse).
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