Reviews for No Power in the 'Verse
jen81265 chapter 2 . 12/31/2006
Excellent. You've done a wonderful job of capturing the voice and tone of the 'Firefly' universe. You have wonderful descriptions and I loved reading your story. I hope you continue. I really miss Firefly.
KrisEleven chapter 2 . 12/18/2006
Chilling ending. I love hwhere this is going. You have an excellent writing stle. Please keep them coiming.

Hellen Lou chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
next chapter is needed... that was cool
torikkusuta chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
This is intriguing. Kinda wordy, but intriguing, since it's hard to characterise River without being wordy. This definately has a lot of potential. If you're still searching for a beta, I'd be glad to do so. I can direct you to someone else on who can vouch for me, or I can show you other examples of my beta work. Feel free to PM me if you're interested.
mbali chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
good start, really intriguing..looking forward to the rest
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 12/3/2006
Good start! I like that you began with another vision that started Serenity, that was interesting. I think it was good to be original and reminesent of that scene at the same time, but I hope you aren't just retelling 'Serenity'. Waiting for the next chapter!