|Reviews for The Coming Storm|
| GuestTypePerson chapter 11 . 3/19/2007
interesting story. i liked it. also i was wondering if you were intending to do a sequel. cause i think that would be interesting. just to see how you would have this all play out. again. i liked the story. have a great day!
| CarlyJo chapter 5 . 2/14/2007
I love this story! I know there are chapters after this but I am wierd and decided to review her. Update Soon!
“Well, I figured I could use the momentum to get my saber through his neck that way.” She scratched the back of her head, “really it seemed like a good idea at the time.” Standing she started gathering abandoned plates. “Dean shot it.”
“And you couldn’t use a gun because why?”
“I didn’t think it would be sharp enough.”
This part meade me crack up! That is something I would have said! lol. :3 )
| H.T.Marie chapter 11 . 2/8/2007
WEll, I gotta admit that I'm a bit behind on reading and reviewing this fic. I shoulda never validated you over at supernaturalville, then I'd get to read every chapter before you post. I haven't actually finished this yet, either, but geez, only 18 reviews, so far? I think people are stupid or something. This is one of the best fics running. I guess maybe you haven't nearly killed anyone enough. Perhaps you should give someone appendicitis or an enema.
| nocturnal08 chapter 11 . 2/8/2007
Yay! Sam gets to go back to college. Awesome. Very good chapter.
| Poaetpainter chapter 10 . 1/30/2007
| nocturnal08 chapter 10 . 1/30/2007
Well, that didn't go as well as we might have hoped, but I'm sure they'll get the hang of it.
| nocturnal08 chapter 9 . 1/22/2007
Aw! That was wonderful. Dean is the most awesome-ist big brother ever. I felt vicariously comforted.
| nocturnal08 chapter 8 . 1/15/2007
It's not nice to leave Sam locked in the trunk! Ah! Definitely feeling the suspense. (yay Dean and Dante bonding!) Now, Sam needs to be rescued and there is the worrisome thing about Dean being in mortal peril, so update soon!
| nocturnal08 chapter 7 . 1/13/2007
This is getting more and more interesting! Liked the reflections about how family can pull the heartstrings in so many different ways. Let's see the champions bond soon (embarressing stories about their kid sibs?) and give them a chance to show their brawn, not just their concern. Good chapter.
| Ciya chapter 6 . 1/10/2007
That's the coolest explaination for Sam's abilities yet.
Sam called the demon? Whoa!
| IncubusHelen chapter 6 . 1/2/2007
wow that was a long chapter lol i loved it though!
update as soon as you can
| DramaDreamer08 chapter 6 . 1/1/2007
I just thought I would tell you that this is GREAT!
| Nilah chapter 5 . 12/25/2006
Ok , I've only skimmed the first chapter, but it seems interesting. I like Bobby's character, so I'll definitely be looking out for your posts.
| Valtira chapter 4 . 12/18/2006
Like Concha - but she was a little rash! She was definately regretting the assault - too late. 2 perfectly good hunters close by - Good story - keep up the great work - Did I mention I loved it! LOL
| IncubusHelen chapter 4 . 12/18/2006
i really liked that! did you just make tartums up? because if you did you did a very good job of it! was a really good chapter update as soon as you can!