Reviews for Divided Attentions
jennyjennai chapter 2 . 1/19/2008
Rough chapter for Keitaro and the gang. Pacing is great and the chapter is well written.
jennyjennai chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
I really enjoyed the twisted plot of this first chapter, can't wait to read more.
dfshie chapter 6 . 7/22/2007
hawt sekese
Godslayer221 chapter 6 . 2/11/2007
I really like this so far. I appreciate the time and effort it takes for you to put together something like this and I just hope you have spare time in the future to continue it.
Wonderbee31 chapter 5 . 12/18/2006
Wonderful part here, and really liked the way things went, though I'm not sure that Naru or Seta will be able to make a real, real relationship work, just because of the way Seta and Naru are.
TornadoReviewer chapter 6 . 12/15/2006
Great story and I must say that Keitaro and Kitsune are really getting still there are still some girls left- wonderful Mutsumi , outstanding Motoko , and cute Shinobu.

Keitaro has some nice choice heh...but I hope it will end with Keit/NOT I give my vote for Mutsumi , Kitsune , Motoko and Shinobu.

As for Naru?Well since Seta is around she should end up with him , or on a Siberia or whatever.

Update soon.

TenshiReike chapter 6 . 12/15/2006
Oh my, it looks like this story can go into a full out orgy like thing *blushes at the thought* umm I like you story and you can make sure I'll be waiting for the next instalment like I have so far.
Major Mike Powell III chapter 6 . 12/15/2006
Well, well, well...

Outstanding work, soldier. I'm impressed. Let me see where to start...

At first, when I saw the words "Naru" and "Seta" in the summary, I didn't know what to think. Really, I didn't know so I just...skipped this fic for awhile. But then it just clicked! If Naru and Seta were together, then Keitaro would NOT be paired with Naru! And since I'm an official and proud Naru-Hater/Basher-Anti-Kei/Naru...

So, I started readin'. And what a pleasant surprise I got, soldier! Hoo-rrah!

Both subtle AND physical Naru-Bashin'! Kei/Kit, Mut/Mot, Mut/Kei/Mot pairings...Jesus FUCK! Outstanding!

This is an excellent fic, soldier. That much I can assure you. And Haruka using a gun AND a steel fan? WHOA! Man, I just realized just HOW sexy Haruka would look in a blue leotard! (I'm talkin' about Kitana, from "Mortal Kombat", if you haven't realized)

So, I think that's it for now, soldier. I'll definetely keep an eye on this story.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Wonderbee31 chapter 6 . 12/15/2006
A wonderful section here, and honestly not sure how Keitaro and the girls might work things out, as they all sincerely love him now, and he is being wore away, I wonder if something will happen to him that might make things impossible to work out? I enjoy the way the realtionships are going, and look forward to the next part.
AegisX-TAIL chapter 6 . 12/15/2006
good chapter...

i get how keitaro feels...

its the pain he's been through that makes him be as he is now...

good chap again..

and adios for now...

D hope you update when you can...
Neverwinter chapter 6 . 12/14/2006
Such a great story, I am surprised that you do not have more reviews. Keep up the good work! In time the reviews will come. You got a fan in me.
advillan chapter 6 . 12/14/2006
great story. written very well. 2 suggestions. 1)if you do involve a more then two person pairing. go for the works with five females to one keitaro. that way all are happy save for naru. 2) please do not add any more sympathy chapters for naru. the betryal facter in your story should remain key. if you add any more about naru, intensify the negativity of her relationship with seta (examples being a) her parents disown her for dating a way older guy b) seta realizes he loves haruka and leaves naru, or c) something happens where naru realizes seta loves his work more than her and she ends up alone. just some suggestions. anyone else agree?
Zhou-Mak chapter 6 . 12/14/2006
Wow, you have written quite possibly the best Keitaro I have ever read. While several things in the base story seem so unreal, you managed to take several real things and combine them with the base Love Hina story to make something surreal and realistic at the same time. Bravo! But I wonder about poor Kaolla Su, What's she spending her time doing? Maybe chapter seven will tell us! *Waits for update* You are doing very well, this is an excellent story.
AegisX-TAIL chapter 5 . 12/9/2006
ouch... :(

you made me sad...

but now i'm a bit happier...

good fic so far...

hope you update soon... :D

Adios for now...
TenshiReike chapter 5 . 12/9/2006
Your really fast at Updating, people ussualy take a week...but I shouldnt jinx it...

Great story Mutsumi is on character, it doesnt say in the manga or anime but the clues she gives does say shes polyamorous wouldnt be bad for Kei to have all 3 girl in the dorms? lol I need to get my head out of the gutter...but still XD
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