Reviews for Disappointment
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2017
Amazing. It was all so in character. Of course Amanda would clue Daniel in. And the line about Wilhelmina and belts was something I could see Daniel saying. I loved this!
Broadwaygirl21 chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
Amazing! I absolutely loved it!
Great job!
Skyline Violet chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Can I just say...I LOVED IT :)
Animefreakkagome chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Aw. I loved the ending! It's so cute. (: Good job!
cookie-dough chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
I have to agree with the other reviewers, you captured Daniel's character wonderfully. Great story.
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Aw, I loved that ending! Great job! :) YAY! :D

bellecatastrophe chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
“I asked Betty to marry me, dad. And she said yes.”

You sure know how to end a story perfectly ]


I loved it.

And yes, you captured Daniel really well. Dissapointment's a harsh word; but thats what he is most of the time.

Wonderful Betty/Daniel; Keep up the good work.

Only one thing...

Malu Snape Rickman chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Aw love it!
Kuon chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
o0o oh my gosh this is so cute and simply sweet
Xira34 chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
This almost make me cry “I asked Betty to marry me, dad. And she said yes.”

I want them to be together
abovetherim chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
I loved it, I think you captured Daniel perfectly! I nhope you continue with this one or write other daniel/betty fan fics!
CarolinaH.Manning chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
this is such a nice story. Im falling in love with the Detty fluff and yours is just touchingly fluffy
Tracy137 chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Go Daniel! Well, I was so impressed with 5 steps that I went hunting for more.

Another winner, of course. You're very good; you should send this to the show - they're of a good enough calibre to easily slot in to the format. As I've already said, it shows not only what a fan you are but also your talent as a writer. Of course now would be too early for them to be used, but I would love to see the show end in this sort of way.

Well done and much kudos to you. I still can't over how superbly you have the characters absolutely nailed. :O)
mcabello chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
Good fic. Hope there more soon.
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