Reviews for The Archer's Bows Have Broken
JMR8282 chapter 41 . 9/12/2014
Interesting! Not the way I would twist the storyline slightly ish but there we go, it worked!
sti chapter 41 . 1/12/2010
I liked this story. The last chapter could be good also like one-shot, but it is good this way, too.
Nay chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
Don't use Listen so many times. It was used four times in the last part of the chapter. Which is way too many times is such a short converstation. Besides that, so far I like it.
Jessie xxx chapter 29 . 4/19/2009
Omg that last bit- amazingly funny! Loving this story!
YourLightWillShine chapter 1 . 4/10/2009

Love it by the way!

I'll be reading . . . . . .
Binka Fudge chapter 41 . 4/7/2009
This story was amazing. You had so many things happening at once and yet they all seemed to fit together perfectly. I'm glad you ended it on a happy note, although considering what happened to them after this point they might have been better off staying in france. Hope to get a chance to read more of your stuff.
Sunshine My Love chapter 41 . 3/10/2009
I loved your story! I was not only well written but the plot was done well according to the original series! Thank you for completing the story (this is something some writers take for granted but as a reader I am thoroughly pleased).
Me chapter 41 . 9/6/2008
Hi, This was really good, very enjoyable, I think you've over rated it though...Its a T in my opintion.

Anyway, Well Done, I loved it!

honeylake chapter 41 . 4/7/2008
All I can say is that it might've been a little fast at getting them back together... but I kinda liked it, too. Like they couldn't live without each other.

Also I loved the line: β€œOne year, three hundred and thirty-seven days-” James checked his watch β€œ-sixteen hours and forty-two minutes.”

How sweet! Good work with this story... Loved it!
Funeral Of A Friend chapter 41 . 3/28/2008
This is a really good story. Though quite a sad ending. I really liked the songs for chapter names.

lilyedwardpotter chapter 41 . 2/27/2008
Hey you!

i have just read your whole story in once and I loved it.

You really have a feeling for developing a storyline. Sometimes you have those stories were suddenly everything happens but yours were the absolut contrary.

Especially because you also brought the part of the war in it and just didnt ignore it. Although I gotta say taht I dont like the last few chapters that much. For me I just didnt fitted into the rest of the story that Lily left him suddenly and all this.

Well okay i have a question. I am from Germany and I wanted to ask for your permission to translate your story into german cause it is really great. And I think it is worth it to be read by other people.

Okay that wa salready it. Just give me an answer when you can.

Lucky7Slevin chapter 41 . 2/4/2008
I really enjoyed your story and, of course, read it in one go.

But one little thing at the end: I thought that their "getting back together" in the last chapter was kind of rushed?

*hides somewhere*

I am sorry, just my point of view.

Apart from that one of the best Lily/James stories Ive read so far.
angelofmynightmare chapter 41 . 2/1/2008

thanks for writing!

LyricFreak chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
I thought Snape and JAmes only glimpsed Remus in the tunnel. So why did both Snape and JAmes have injuries?

Lilian85 chapter 41 . 1/31/2008
I'm finally through with the whole story and I absolutely loved it!
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