|Reviews for The War of the Worlds: Darkness Rising|
| nursejoy7 chapter 33 . 3/19/2013
that was a really cute story :) I like if even if I'm not a Harry potter's fan
| Aurinko chapter 33 . 5/23/2011
Loved the story. The Oz/HP crossovers are always a nice mix, and I loved your Gelphie. Fiyero/Hermione was an interesting addition. Off to read your sequel!
| uppitymary chapter 33 . 10/4/2010
fantastical! h.p and wicked my two favorite things :))) this is goin in my favorites
| Temporarily-Obsessed chapter 33 . 5/20/2010
| Wolf-of-Five-Elements chapter 33 . 1/12/2010
Awesome story! I think that you blended the two worlds quite well and still kept the characters pretty believable. Great job!
| TheDevilYouDon't chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Might I ask what the hell you were thinking when you came up with the idiotic ideas for these 'War of the Worlds' stories? They are ridiculous and the plots make no sense.
| Ellis-is-Love chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Just to let you know.
I do believe that this story is amazing.
I love it,
and i love you for writing it
| Pernicia chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Great beginning, I've never read a Hp/Wicked crossover before. I'm sure it will be WICKED (extremely lame pun intended).
Although this is VERY late, I think either slashes would work, and you should definitely do one. I think I slightly prefer Fiyeraba, though I have no problems with Gelphie (sometimes I wonder how people think of these names. But, that'd be being a hypocrite.)
Can't wait to read more!
| Wolfen Dreams chapter 10 . 12/30/2008
So, I don't usually bother reviewing chapters other than the most recently updated chapter, but I'm on a team at school where we hold mock trials, so I felt compelled to comment on the trial.
Overall, it was a fairly good representation of a trial. There were only a few things that stuck out as bothersome to me. One was that you were missing opening and closing statements, in which both the defense and the prosecution should have outlined what they were arguing and what specific purpose each witness would serve. (i.e. for the prosecution, they might have spoken on how "Snape was long regarded as a death eater by many of the students, and it was dismissed as hearsay, but recent evidence has come to the fore to show that this was, in fact, an accurate accusation. First, we will bring to the stand Mr. Ronald Weasley, a student of the defendant who will profess to having been tortured by the defandant and assorted Death Eaters. We will also bring to the stand Mr. Lucius Malfoy, who will testify to having once seen Severus Snape fighting with the Death Eaters. The defense will have you believe that he is simply wrongly accused, but we hope that the jury will take the evidence presented here today and find this man guilty beyond clear and reasonable doubt of the crimes he has been accused of.") Likewise for the defense and closing statments for both sides.
For the objections, you have to actually name what you are objecting against. For example, if Ron had heard Snape say "I'm a death eater, and I would like you to join me!" to Elphie, then the other lawyer would have said "Objection - hearsay!" Also, the lawyer usually asks for the chance to defend his question. So with the question about Elphie and Snape's supposed romantic relationship would have gone more like this:
Lawyer 1: "Miss. Thropp, is it true that you and Snape are romantically involved?"
Lawyer 2: "Objection - Relevance!"
Lawyer 1: "May I be heard?"
Lawyer 1: "I am attempting to ascertain the exact nature of the relationship between the witness and the defendant and why she is a reliable source." (really, he's trying to discredit her, but he can't just say that)
Judge: "Objection is overruled, answer the question."
The trial was too short, but with the addition of proper objections and an opening and closing statements form both sides should remedy that.
So yeah... Now you have some info on the off chance you ever need to write a trial again? lol
| LinkThePhantomOfTheNight chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
i think this is very good so far
| typicalRAinbow chapter 33 . 10/19/2008
What a brillient story defnilaty the best harry potter i've seen XD sorry for not reviewing earlier but i just couldnt stop reading (ow my eyes dam laptops)! you have the charaters down to a tea and the discripions are awsome :D welldone you, i hopes you be proud of yourself!
| PadmePotter chapter 33 . 5/25/2008
Just finished War of the Worlds and I was beyond impressed. This was also my first femslash piece and I thought you handled it perfectly. The romance was sweet and meshed well with the action.
The ending broke my heart but than I found the sequel and I can't wait to get started. I'm hoping there my happy ending will be:)
Again, great job and I can't wait to get on the next story!
| Slytherin'sNotebook chapter 19 . 2/3/2008
yay! *does voctory dance* i guessed ron was the traitor lol!
wen i first looked at this it didn't seem that interesting but now i'm hooked! just goes to show that you can't judge a fic by it's summary!
| Valkyrie War Cry chapter 14 . 12/1/2007
it's funny how Harry Potter was on tv tonight, and it was the extended version, so Snape was lecturing Harry in the potions classroom in front of the class. And this line:
“The other day, when it was all white and snowy outside, I went for a walk in the cold air and as I was strolling around the castle grounds, I saw something very unusual. Two young women, kissing. On the mouth. There may have been tongue involved.”
Is so Snape! Geat job! I also loved this line:
Had Elphaba been born with peach-colored flesh, she would have been beet red right about now. But instead she was turned a bright lime green.
It's so funny!
| Sale chapter 33 . 11/17/2007
Okay, first off, thank you for making a potentially dull plane ride very interesting!
I kept having visions from DS games popping up during the story...like during the courtroom scene, the entire thing was playing itself out, Phoenix Wright style. And in the hospital wing scene near the end I suddenly got Trauma Center popping up. It was odd.
And I also couldn't help but giggle when you mentioned Fred Weasley's son near the beginning. I suppose you must've written this before the sixth book? Anyway, I liked this. I definitely liked this, even though I am in no way a Gelphie shipper. The Harry Potterness was most entertaining. And I kind of wish Nessa could've been in it, but that's the way things go, I guess. XD