Reviews for Chase
Megan Consoer chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Selya chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Wow, that was horrible how he killed her after JUST having sex with her. Really makes Amon look like a freak.

Like it would make it easer if someone you loved shot you in cold blood after using you like a sex toy. I'd rather it by a complete stranger thanks.

Brutal,and non romantic or touching in anyway!
Joe chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
That was sick and vulgar.

I couldn't even stand to read most of it. I had to skim the beginning then skip to the end. Your writing would be a thousand times better if you didn't use words dug up from the deepest mud pits of humanity. The plot was all right, though a bit shallow; I'd just advise you to reflect on your word choice.
lindajrjt chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Yikes this was definitely not what I expected. I wish Amon had killed the Inquistor first and then went back to save Robin. It was a well written and good story though. I just hate the idea of those two not together anymore.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
That was shit. If you want a story, especially a sex scene to be romantic at all you need to write it carefully and gracefully. When you use words like ass cheaks it sounds like some vulgar porno or the story was just written so the 13 year old author can get off on it.
Scorpion DOADA chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
Beautifuly done yet once again. I used to read your witch hunter robin fictions from and then it got blocked in my country. Finding you here I was more than just trilled. You are one of my favorite authors after all. The story was just too good. Bye I have go, and read the other stories you wrote just can't wait.
KuraRose chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
* brust out in tears* omg O.O thats really sick you know. I really loved it and enjoyed it to the end. But that was just so sick in every way.

Your writing however was beautiful done. I was so into it. Though now i'm just so sad.
milkthepanda chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
I personally loved it. It was very touching.
flamingphoenixofpride chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Hey Jd Again you wrote a hell of a one-shot me like.( is this the one you mentioned on af)