Reviews for A Fool's Tear
Lily-Finn178 chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
omg! such a heart-wrenching fic! please, please, PLEASE make another chapter. i can't bear to see shikakun in such a depressed mood. plus, this has the makings of an excellent multi-chapter fic!
Elsie0o0 chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Aww poor Shika-kun. T_T I really hope you continue, you are a marvelous writer. This story was excellent. Take care, Elsie.
tomboy14 chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
that was so depressing! wah! poor shikamaru! well, i really liked this! way to make neji such a good person! there was a big neji and shikamaru friendship in this thing, and i always thought they would be good friends. well, awesome job! maybe you could make this into a chapter fic!
Aralka chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Interesting. It would make an excellent beginning to a multi-chapter story, actually; especially with Neji's words at the end.

Good job, however, I spotted a few grammar mistakes. But it's nothing too serious. also, a big plus for describing Shikamaru's feelings; it fits him well and it's really hard. Overall, you did a very good job on this story, keep up the good work!
forloveormoney chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
you don't know until you try Shika!

This is a great story, and very well done!

Great job!