Reviews for Flowers In A Lightning Storm
Shikabane-Mai chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
This is... so sad. I wonder how Edward would react if he were to find out about Roy and Riza.
SakuraTeardrop chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
aww...poor ed, you did a great job on this!
Cashmeritan chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
Beautiful.
HeavenShallBurn chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
Ahh, quite well done! *claps* Ed/Rizas are so fun! *stamps "Masterpiece" on oneshot and exits*
last white feather chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
It's a lucky day for all of the stories that I read -I'm *actually* reviewing them *gasp*!

As for the story, it was great -except for one teeny, tiny mistake that didn't even really matter much, except that I like to nitpick so...

Mistake: Once she got back into the bedroom, she thought that she should probably mention to Roy I again /I that Hayate wasn’t allowed on the bed...

Either way, it still is a great story, you're going on my favorites *acts nerdy*!
Dragonix chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
It's a miracle. I'm reviewing O_O

Anyway.

There's a reason as to why I put this as my favourite in your Fic!Meme on LJ :3 It just really appeals to me with what's going on in the fic (And the fact poor Ed's is... err... a few years too late), and the flowers _ It's a really nice idea, and wonderfully written. I really enjoyed it
Dailenna chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
O_O Aw! Poor Ed! Still, very cute piece - easy to read :)