Reviews for Descent
Hiljaisuus chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Dear Author!

I want to say that your fic is great!Thank you very much for writing it!

Would you mind if I translated it into Russian language and may be published it on some websites(I can give you links if will decide to do it)Of course I will state everywhere that I'm just a translator and you are the author of the fic.

Thank you once again for your wonderful work!

Best wishes,

Hiljaisuus

P.S.I can't leave you a PM,so write there...
Miss Lily Rose Snape chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
breath taking. you are an amazing writer.
neener.will.quit chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
wow. that was intense.

very well done.

-dal
Tsumire chapter 1 . 12/5/2006
I like this! Dark and morbid and utterly insane, but the disturbing elements are what make it good.

Now for some constructive criticism - more detail. I know it's a one-shot and it's supposed to be confusing, but don't be afraid to tell about the why of everything - especially _why_ Snape is on the ground dead, and Hermione seems to be responsible (?). Oh, and this is just a nitpick and not very important but you listed the story as SSHG when I don't really find anything in the text that implies a romantic relationship.

Still, overall it was bleak and crazy and I truly enjoyed it. Keep it up.