Reviews for Halfdemon havoc
NarHina chapter 6 . 7/24/2016
It was ok but I am worried if all the chapter are going to be this long I like fight scenes but I really want to get to the NaruHina parts.

I would say try and shorting the fights a bit, but you can't help what you write I would suggest though writing the fights in sections.

Can't wait to see when they get to leaf.

And hope you will continue.

Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
BlackDemon Writer chapter 5 . 5/8/2016
Good fanfiction, but too much unnecessary spam content
hiNAru Aburame chapter 6 . 2/1/2013
Hi! emmm, very interesting... i like it much and i hope you continue... soon..? ... please?...

Greetings! n_n
Guest chapter 6 . 9/25/2012
please write more! .
Guest chapter 6 . 9/10/2012
Please write more-hinanaru! Maybe fenris and some one else as well! Love the story so far! Please please PLEASE write more soon!
Miriatza chapter 6 . 8/24/2012
Awsome! That was an amazing and detailed fighting scene!i escpecly loved when the other villagers like the boy and Forman worker found out they were demons! Can't wait to see the rest of the villager sreaction to fenris and naruto! Hope next chapter comes soon and I say this was a fantastic written chapters so far ;D Love the Characters! Xxx
avatar9663 chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
I don't want to complain. But didn't you say at the beginning of this Chapter that you would see this story through. Its going on 4 years since the last update. This story is so interesting, please update soon. I would love to see how the fight ends for both of the boys. Please update soon. Even if it is only a small chapter. Give us something to nibble on. Or if your stuck post questions to help you along...just suggestions. i would love to see this story continued.
Led Floyd chapter 6 . 12/11/2010
Please continue its very good and i want to know what happens next
IDK2391 chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
an intriguing concept, except you didn't proof read your work.

them selves is themselves

continuing of there centuries is continuing of their

etc etc
Star Dust of Ancient Novae chapter 6 . 12/12/2009
Lucem Yoru chapter 6 . 7/20/2009
A great chap but i am wondering if you are done with the next 1? I really wan't to know what hapends next and this is a great story.

btw no sry did not see the joke.
narutos vixen chapter 6 . 12/28/2008
when is hinata going to be in the story will naruto and his friend be going to konoha
the black shinobi chapter 6 . 12/25/2008
All your Chapters are great. And I have an idea for the name of the wolf demon you might like and a little info you can use if you want to or not.

The Wolf Demon: Raijuu, The Thunder Beast or Romulus/Remus

Abilites: Limitless pure energy, and instant rejuvenation

Info: One of The Legendary Three Elders (you decide the other two)

Wisest of the three and watches over the earth of humans and even loves the bijuu, the tailed-beasts, and often refers to them as children or little brothers/sisters.

Raijuu allowed himself to get sealed into a newborn human in order to save the infants life. (you can decide from there what to do from there)

hoped that helped some right more.
unanimous chapter 6 . 11/22/2008
awesome fight scenes its very descriptive making it interesting
keplo chapter 6 . 10/28/2008
geez long ass fight -_- i rly hate long fights i mean 2chappys long fight is just too much. well i guess "dont like dont read" but i like otherwise just fine but fight was booring tbh O_O
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