Reviews for White Candle
Sarah Crawford chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Beautiful poem.
phantom-jedi1 chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
Lyrical, with obvious care taken in the word selection. A nice poem. Good job!

phantom_jedi
Luckii.jinx chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
I love this poem. I says so much..

The only thing is that in the line 'Christine, fleeting Christine!' I thought it might have been better if it was '

Christine, fleeing Christine!' because the 't' sound was repeated in every word and is kind of distracting from the meaning of the poem. But the poem itself is very beautiful and very well written. I hope you found this helpful!
LittleLottexoxEriksTrueAngel chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
that was beautiful...amazing job!