|Reviews for The ending and a new beginning|
| jasmine chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
awesome one shot you are good
| James's Baby Girl chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
I thought that that was so sweet . I wish they would have done that in the movie I think any teenage girl who watched the movie could tell that they are in love . when you get a chance could put more chapters in Now You See It a Narriation please and thankyou.
| Joe Jonas's girl chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
aww that's so sweet now that is the way I think it should have ended
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
AHH! I love this rendition! U
You rock, dude! The peril in which Allyson and Danny were in was so dramatic! Absolutely wonderful!
Danny/Allyson is the best! U *U*
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
P.S.- This is one of the best 'NYSI' stories I've ever read! Rock on!
P.S.S.- If Max scares me, does that make me a whimp? XD
P.S.S.S.- I did notice a few punctuation errors, but otherwise, this was well-written! Maybe a bit rushed at the end with the 'I love you's, but rock on! *U*
| Mizuki-Fire-Dragon chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Aww,but the "I love you," part was pretty straightforward.
| freaky-callback-girl chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
very good i like this ending its awesome.
| Miki34 chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
AW...I was at church so I only got to read this now.
| reader1718 chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
Very dramatic! Also very cute. I love this movie and this alternate ending is very interesting. I wonder if Disney will ever put it out on video or DVD and, if so, if they'll have an alternate ending. I guess we'll find out.