Reviews for A Matter of Patience |
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![]() ![]() A genuinely great bonding experience. If only this was in the actual show lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this is INTERESTING however, wouldn't her parents be hiding her from the world? |
![]() ![]() A great story, very cute |
![]() ![]() Um, their mom's name is Kya |
![]() ![]() this is one of those fanfictions that I pretend are cannon because I love it so much Lovely job on this! |
![]() ![]() Really liked it. They were almost like kindred souls, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this collection of stories, particularly the Combustion Man one. His powers always intrigued me, and I have always wondered what, exactly, he was. An assassin from a religious cult in the Fire Nation? A man-made super soldier created by ritualistic torture and warped Chi-bending? So many possibilities... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is perfect! God your toph is spot on and so is your bumi! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... This is amazing. Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Re-reading this years later in no way diminishes the awesomeness of your fic and the spot-on depictions of the show's characters. Enthralling, inventive, and (above all) entertaining! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems legit. :3 if it was an episode i'd watch it. |
![]() ![]() I completely love this chapter *.* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found this story not only amazing (for your dead on characterizations of Toph and Bumi, as well as your virtuoso grasp of the English language), but quite intriguing as well. I recently wrote a Bumi and Toph fic where they actually faced off in Bumi's dueling arena. I won't spoil it, in case you wish it for yourself (and I would highly encourage you to, if only to get feedback from such a talented writer). Suffice to say I enjoyed this immensely, being a diehard Bumi fan. The Pterodactyl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful...! I really liked this fic. I love Toph, and Bumi is likewise one of my fave characters. Your writing was flawless and very insightful, and I'm eager to read the other chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. you probably wouldn't understand, but this story really impressed me. the characterization was spot on (just too bad toph couldn't be all uncouth, but you really nailed it with her unhappiness before meeting the gaang). it's a really refreshing change from all the other toph fics. most deal with her with the gaang or her entire life (some of the fics are really enjoyable too!) but yours is just special -adds to favs- thanks for making my day! |