Reviews for Interruptions
Slim Shady chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Lyre-19 chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
BWAHAHAHAHA! that's great! it kinda reminds me of when someone teased my friend at lunch time, except we're both girls and i wanted to beat them up for her! i had to settle with confusing the idoits and insulting them with such advanced vocabulary (and in three different languages lol) that they didn't even know i was insulting them.

I loved this fic! very funny! the characters and story were nicely written!
chineseretard92 chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
very nice! ) i liked it alot... rite morE?
Jesus.Lives chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
"who looked like she hadn’t eaten in days so she could fit in her kimono."

- that's a cool line, but just reminds me that Smellerbee is heaps skinnier than anyone! :D That's not her issue.

I think she takes offence more to being mistaken for a boy because she's flat chested. Believe me... I was flat chested at 15... and it's not nice! :D

“You beat them up didn’t you?” He asked her with a small smirk noticing a small patch of dirt on her cheek.

- hahahaahhaahaha! SUCH a cute ending though!
Mikosa chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
Aw I loved it! Even if Smellerbee is out to dinner she can't resist a fight can she? Please write more Longerbee stories! Because I LOVE THEM!
xHollywoodBound chapter 1 . 12/7/2006

that's what they get!

you should keep going!
Twilight Sheep chapter 1 . 12/6/2006
Short, sweet and to the point. Good job!