Reviews for Listless |
---|
![]() ![]() I'm reading this story for maybe the tenth time, and I still love it. After ending with Xemnas dirty trick I missed the significance of Axel eating with Riku. Before this he only ate with gusto with Larxene. I don't think he even ate a lot with Demyx and Roxas. We knew it would happen but what a wonderful way to solidify the way Axel's feelings have grown. Just another of your many details, large and small, that deepen the characters and enrich the story |
![]() ![]() I don't usually comment on the writing of authors that haven't written in a few years. I just assume they've lost interest or moved on. But your story is so unique, so powerful, such a good read that I just have to tell you how much I loved it. It's a great story. I laughed I cried I ached for Axel and Riku and Larxene. And in the end I smiled even though I had tears in my eyes. Its true that you really need a good beta, but you are a great writer. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was wierd. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just gonna pretend everything is okay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't handle this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel really bad for Riku. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't let Riku die. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like this, it's sad. And I think Larxene is pregnant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter made me feel depressed. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That last phrase slayed me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love how different thus story is than the average kh story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh! Why do you do this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really honestly loved this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder how Larxene knows Riku. |