Reviews for Listless
Guest chapter 18 . 4/3
I'm reading this story for maybe the tenth time, and I still love it.

After ending with Xemnas dirty trick I missed the significance of Axel eating with Riku. Before this he only ate with gusto with Larxene. I don't think he even ate a lot with Demyx and Roxas. We knew it would happen but what a wonderful way to solidify the way Axel's feelings have grown. Just another of your many details, large and small, that deepen the characters and enrich the story
Fan.Fiction.Love chapter 25 . 10/26/2015
I don't usually comment on the writing of authors that haven't written in a few years. I just assume they've lost interest or moved on. But your story is so unique, so powerful, such a good read that I just have to tell you how much I loved it. It's a great story. I laughed I cried I ached for Axel and Riku and Larxene. And in the end I smiled even though I had tears in my eyes. Its true that you really need a good beta, but you are a great writer. Thank you.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 25 . 7/14/2014
This was wierd.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 24 . 7/14/2014
I'm just gonna pretend everything is okay.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 23 . 7/14/2014
I can't handle this.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 22 . 7/14/2014
I feel really bad for Riku.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 21 . 7/14/2014
Please don't let Riku die.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 20 . 7/14/2014
I don't like this, it's sad. And I think Larxene is pregnant.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 19 . 7/14/2014
This chapter made me feel depressed. I loved it.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 18 . 7/14/2014
That last phrase slayed me.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 17 . 7/14/2014
I absolutely love how different thus story is than the average kh story.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 16 . 7/14/2014
Finally! !
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 14 . 7/13/2014
Ugh! Why do you do this?
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 13 . 7/13/2014
I really honestly loved this chapter!
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 12 . 7/13/2014
I wonder how Larxene knows Riku.
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