Reviews for The Incident
arizony chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
No, I don't think it is totally out of character. In fact, I think that it is totally in character. When you love someone as deeply and as dearly as Aang does Katara, you would do anything, even placing yourself at risk in every way possible to protect the one you love. Aang has proven that over and over, so I don't think it is out of character for either one of them. As to their ages, I think that Aang is far more mature than many think he is. As to his juvenile attitudes, hey, I'm a guy, older than most around here, and I still see myself as the 19 year old boy that joined the Navy, lo these many years ago. All guys are like that.
BlackRose108 chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
wow that was amazing! can't wait till you make your next absolute power story! *favs*
thebloodfiend chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
i liked this though it was a bit ood
InkHeart17 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Just charming. Very well written
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
I love it! It's funny, fluffish, and has fighting! "You haven't earned the righ to see me this way . . yet."
scorpiaux chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
Wonderful! That was hilarious. I love how you added in the little cabbage guy notes. Very nice one shot (are you planning on continuing it?) I loved it.

Well written, and a good plot. Nice.

The Violent Tomboy chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
Dark with VERY light bits of humor, not to mention the Kataang-ness. Quite nice.

But I'm still slightly irked about you shaving Toph's head, even if it is a good idea...
Fanwoman chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
That was lovely! I've been wondering why they don't try letting Aang's hair grow out to hide his tattoo; I'm glad I'm not the only one who has considered the possibility. And Toph as a decoy Avatar? I love it! So many great ideas in one fic, and so well written, too-thank you!
lim3gr33nkoolaid chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
Aww, that was so cute! The ending made me squeel. . It was very well-written as well.

Yet another great story, whirleeq. Cheers. 8-)
mistresskatara chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
Brilliant. The concept is inspired, and your execution is beautiful. Such a wonderful story. I've heard so many great things about you, but this is the first one of your fics I've read. I guess I have a lot of catching up to do. _ Can't wait for your next one!
Artemis Rae chapter 1 . 12/11/2006
This really was a lovely little piece - I really appreciated the glimpse into what it might be like if they had to go undercover, which I've actually wanted to explore myself for a while. And of course, the kataang, as always, was greatly appreciated. There's an incredible lack of decent Kataang fics floating around, and I'm always happy to see someone come out with a new, good, one. I hope you keep writing, because I'll be looking for you!
xXxEndangeredSpeciesxXx chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
I am very impressed! You have a distinct flair for writing that makes the reader crave more even after the final word. Despite "perverting canon," I think aang and katara were very in-character, and I love the scenario you've created, it makes me want to see Aang with hair! - The part with the cabbage man, "acts of god" was pure genius!
MysticAnime chapter 1 . 12/9/2006

I was begining to think you may have died or something O.o;!

- Glad you didn't WhirleeQ. And you're muse is in full Aang x Katara mode I read _~ Love it!


MormonMaiden chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
Yay for Kataang fluffery! And YAY! for the Cabbage Man! _x
Lan Shen chapter 1 . 12/7/2006
aw...horomonely stressed out children... :D I love kataang! Great job on the fic!
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