|Reviews for Power Struggle|
| Larissa Loyd chapter 45 . 4/16/2013
'Read those first and wake me, if you must.'
| Larissa Loyd chapter 37 . 4/14/2013
"What part of being stuck with me for all eternity didn't you get?"
I keep on quoting things from chapters. Truth is, I usually don't review while reading a complete story. I review every chapter AFTER I have read it all. I stille wanted to mention the phrases and places which had made me laugh.
| Larissa Loyd chapter 35 . 4/14/2013
feeling decidedly un-Goblin-Queen-y :D
"If I mention hide-'n-seek, they'd probably stay under the beds themselves." XD
Oh that's a hell of an ending! I got the goosebumps.
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/11/2013
Girl, you have a knack for mischief. :D
| larissa loyd chapter 10 . 4/11/2013
I also laughed as I read that bit with the pan. It was a precious image in my head.
| Larissa Lawren chapter 4 . 4/10/2013
So long as you respect the scenery, it probably won't eat you. :D
| Kypriothe chapter 50 . 3/6/2013
In my respectful opinion, I don't think you quite captured Jareth's personality, but then again, from all the fanfics I've read, none have quite satisfied me in that particular aspect. He's pretty tricky. I suppose he /is/ a Goblin King.
Annoyed by the name 'Brianna'. Somehow it doesn't seem to fit a Goblin Princess, let alone a future Goblin Queen. I do love the name 'Marek', though ('A Song for Summer', perhaps?) so it's all k.
Fantastic story regardless; it didn't allow me to do my homework until I finished it. Very complex.
Nice Firefly and Princess Bride references.
| fringeperson chapter 50 . 1/12/2013
That was beautiful. From beginning to end, I was captivated. twenty to two in the morning. Yep. Couldn't stop reading.
| Bushesobrandy chapter 6 . 12/19/2012
My only complaint, as of now, is the fact that they are so informal with Jareth, except for Sarah because I love that. I'm just picky but I do love this story. I'm going to continue on to the next chapter now!
| Bushesobrandy chapter 2 . 12/19/2012
So far, I love this story. Making Jareth a surly, out of sorts, maniacal man gives me tinglies in the pit of my stomach. Keep it up! Well, since this story is finished... I guess I won't have to wait to see. Ha ha ha.
| reader chapter 9 . 11/12/2012
Karen. I've never been particularly against you, but I never thought I'd find myself cheering you on, either. Nice work with the skillet.
| Slytherin Head chapter 50 . 8/9/2012
I think weirdly enough my favorite character was Ack. I don't know why but he was pretty awesome. And I feel so bad for laughing at all the pranks that were done to Marek, but they were just too good! XD
Great story, I was a little hesitant to read it, but now I'm just so glad that I did. I'm also really glad that I'm not Sarah and I don't have to wait three years just to have one kid, but I suppose that it's a good thing, otherwise Jareth would end up having a whole army or kids by the time he and Sarah died. O_O
Thanks for sharing this epic story with us!
| MayGirl85 chapter 50 . 8/4/2012
| Anono chapter 50 . 4/25/2012
Very enjoyable, I like the
Idea of sarah keeping a journal- I'd like to use it in a fic if that's ok with you?
| Atmlop chapter 48 . 4/25/2012
Prefer lt myself...
Poor Sarah, at least her hair is back to brown