|Reviews for Trivial Pulse|
| Kreuz24 chapter 52 . 1/10/2013
Wow This is such a long story, but what the heck? This plot is very engaging, and I love how you made the characters grow and develop... Especially, Fuji and Tezuka's early phase through parenthood. Though I wish, you could have gave a sneak-peek of the perfect pair's wedding (I know that I always cry on weddings, HAPPY TEAR! TuT). Anyway, this is such a great read, and I'm currently willing myself to read
Critical Beat. Cant really help but fall in-love with Ayumu - so kawaii, like a Tezuka mini-me _ well, I also like Atsuko, and hopefully she gets 'mommy's' playfully sadistic streak.
Gambatte, ne? Can't wait to read more of your works! _
| Eru no Tsubasa chapter 52 . 8/26/2011
Wow, awesome story! Ayame was enough to drive me insane, and I'm normally very calm and composed... even Honda-san from vierblith's story didn't really elicit much of a reaction from me, even though she was evil. I could kinda understand her though, but Ayame was plain delusional and crazy. XD Anyways thanks for writing this! XD
| Eru no Tsubasa chapter 18 . 8/25/2011
KYAAAA! I knew it! I knew it! It was Kabaji! I WAS RIGHT!
... okay, stop staring at me as if I'm insane... XD
| Eru no Tsubasa chapter 10 . 8/25/2011
"Kaoru," Inui's voice caught Kaido's immediate attention. The older boy wheeled his chair around to face the underclassman, one hand still resting on the desk. Kaido's eyes settled on that hand, and he had to pry them away as Inui began speaking again. "Eould you have a look at this? This stream of data looks strange." Kaido's eyebrows rose slightly. Even if it looked strange to Inui, what would it matter what it looked like to him?
"Of course, Senpai," he said, still the ever faithful kohai.
"You may have to zoom in," Inui said, moving aside so that Kaido could get in front of the computer. Kaido bent over to get a good view, and then grabbed the mouse, zooming as Inui had instructed. What he saw made him gasp. There were words written in the data!
'Will you go to Atobe's Ball with me?' Kaido read, looking to Inui, a blush coming across his face. Inui tilted his head with a perplexed expression, waiting for Kaido to say something. "W-what...?" Kaido started, but didn't know what to say. Was Inui messing with him?
LMAO, this is the nerdiest way I've ever heard of someone asking someone else out... but it so suits Inui! Hilarious! XD Poor Taka, always left out... XD
| Eru no Tsubasa chapter 5 . 7/19/2011
Wow, interesting idea! :) Fuji and Tezuka with wings... *gasp* Angels! KYAAA!
| Kimmytrainer chapter 52 . 4/7/2011
awesome story, i'm favoriting it. and reading the sequel. u might want 2 be prepared 4 me 2 bother u about updating it if it isn't finished (as in review 2 many times, if that's even possible). just a warning. XP
anyway, great story, i gotta go read the sequel now!
| Kimmytrainer chapter 18 . 4/6/2011
2 things. well, 3. 1, this is a really good story! 2, is that line some chapters back that Fuji's mom said from Fruits Basket? you know, 'my only regret is that that thing came out of my body' or watev it was. and 3, while it fits, i must say that i find Kabaji being romantic towards Taka is slightly creepy 2 me... but i'll get used 2 it, so it's all good! anyway, this is really good, so i'm gonna read more now! :)
| Ligare chapter 27 . 2/3/2011
I wish to make it clear that I'm not against slash, but don't you think, realistically, at least a few of the characters have a fair chance to be straight?
How's the next generation going to be born if well nigh everyone is gay?
| Ducks R Evil chapter 52 . 10/4/2010
i really enjoyed reading this!
i didn't like hwo there were too many other plot lines (kinda hard to focus on seigaku) but i liked the rest
| pentalion chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
| xXviolenceisgolden chapter 21 . 7/15/2010
OMG, awesomeness. Can't wait to read more, unfourtunatly it's more than a little late over here.
"as if he had just told him to pee in holy water" Good one.
I'll read the rest tomorrow, it's going great!
| Airyballoon chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
hm...kinda strange that they'd change randomly because of an earthquake, doncha think? This is just like animorphs
| meltedpoo chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Possibly my third time reading this.
it's just so beautiful.
It's been a year or so since I last read it.
Brings back memories.
| xxasianicexx chapter 52 . 8/24/2009
yay! *sing song voice* fuji's papa is going to DIE XD " 3 niouXyagyu a PMSing yagyuu is something Id love to see. kunimitsu is 3 and love all the pairings in this fic!
| kagayaspirits chapter 14 . 5/7/2009
why did Fuji even bother to call Ryuuzaki-sensei before doing that trick of his? didnt he realize that shed get worried about both of them too? how careless, Fujiko :D