Reviews for Ramen in the Snow
Moon Dog 05 chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
lol that is a hilarious way to come up with a story. but may i ask why in the world did you put ramen into snow in the first place?
Tchabita A chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
What the hell does dobe mean anyway?

Naruto... lived in an apartment? Really? I was never sure but... he lives by himself without constant supervision and surveillance of someone else, preferably older than him? Can't he live with someone else instead so that he'd REALLY BE OKAY? xD

LOL! Naruto; that's disgusting! Eew! He hate the ramen that was starting to make the snow melt? Serves him right for being so darned disgusting. xD

In Naruto's thoughts:

'What if Neji were in there?' , shouldn't that be "was" instead of "were" ? . xD :P

AHH!SO SWEET! SO SWEET! Damn cavities! AHH! SO SWEET! :D :) xD

Neji... You killjoy! :P .

Tenten x Neji! xD :D :)

In the narration 'Neji turend to to bun-haired kunoichi...' shouldn't that be "turned" and shouldn't the second "to" be "the" ? xD :P . :D :)


Yet again, permission to print this out and show it to my friends? Assuming it's granted, I will do it right now... xD

Keep it up! Have more stories especially ones like those I've reviewed do far! They were GREAT! I LOVE YOUR STORIES and most especially, I LOVE YOU! :D :)
Averiella chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
I am going to try ramon snow
Hatake Tsughi chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Sweet, very nice 1-shot.
AnimeFAN123456789876543211234 chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
It was great, I mean the whole Neji killing Naruto later was Pretty funny, and mostly written well not really that much fluff for a story like this, and finally you spent to much time on naruto and his ramen that scene was good but it shortened your purpose
dragunzahurr chapter 1 . 3/20/2007

i liked the thoughts you gave naruto they were sweet

braindamage730 chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
good 1 shot
hazelAC405 chapter 1 . 2/14/2007
only 1 word to exlpain this fic 'cute'
nazzy and jerkez chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Cute one-shot! And Tenten's "Would you stop glaring at the window like it was going to suddenly jump at you with a knife?" was really cute xD

And, WTF?

I will C-E-R-T-I-A-N-L-Y kill you if you don't update Kunoichi's Animals soon! I don't care how much you pretend to be Shikamaru, and in this case, I'M INO! Get up, you lazy bum, and update the story!

Sorry, but you had to understand that i love the story.

koju chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
update or ill kill you
Lunarangel's Dark Flame chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
That was so cute and Neji, leave Naru-kun alone adn be happy with Ten-chan. Loved the story! Bai-Bai!
Del Nayar chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
I actually enjoyed very much! Yes keep up the good work and don't let anyone else tell you otherwise. HOOAH!
Shikamaruslover chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
hurray for you!

err...this is your buddy who you probally hate because of my screen name. but hey can't deny the truth...anyways this was a sweet story even though like Naruto ate yellow snow and stuff XD
Ondjage chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
EXCELLENT! This was a good fluffy read for me. It certainly brightened my mood. And so close to Christmas, and the snow. What a perfect scene. I can picture it so vividly in my head.

This story was the best. I give you thumbs up! Glad we have some more talent in the NaruHina section of _
Black-Neko-Chan chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
That was an awesome story! The kiss was written really well. The part with Neji was funny also. You should do more NaruHina fics!
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