Reviews for The Way To Their Hearts
ish.the.abstract chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
this was priceless...hilarious
PiscesHateScorpios chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
oh that is one hilarious story!


PHS chapter 2 . 6/29/2008
This is a great story, you should defiantly update soon.
ohthatsmyname chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
lol. wow that is like such great offenses

tsk tsk. u bad guys.
ohthatsmyname chapter 2 . 5/10/2008
one word: CONTINUE!

another word: please?
LouisaMB chapter 2 . 4/5/2008
:D I really like this and hope you update when you can (or feel like it, cause everyone knows the best writers are the laziest).
AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
heh. They can't cook at all. *sigh* This is why their wives can't leave them. They need the girls to keep them together...


(Choji, would you mind coming to me? I would love to try your cooking...*smacks lips* cookies would be TASTY!)


Update soon.



Melitza chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
Eh? This one isn't done yet right? Very funny and cute and CRACK-LARIOUS!
shewhowearsglasses chapter 2 . 2/8/2008
I wonder? Cotinue...! (Even though my horrid spelling may make it hard for you to continue on living...!)

too-much-romance chapter 2 . 1/8/2008
...I'm gonna be honest here, I don't think I can give you a good a review as I did in the first chapter. *sigh* But I'll do my best! Yosh!

First paragraph. Reaction: *laughs* That's Hinata? Wowzers.

...absolutely insane, right up until the actual birth). Reaction: HA! How true...not that I'd know from experience or anything *looks back and forth*

"Don't you call him a moron!" Reaction: *sings* Mood swings~

...slim fingers poking her (very flat) stomach. Reaction: For a second there, I thought it said "fat stomach". XD

...from beautiful! Maybe –”

“—you’ll shut up so the rest...

Reaction: I should SO use that kind of thing somewhere. Awesome...

Neji paused in the middle of stirring the broth for stew. Reaction: This is the part in the story where somebody sneezes because someone is thinking about them...

Killing Intent? Reaction: For them? Or Ino and her question in the last scene? XD

Uchiha. Hyuuga. Glare. Glare. Reaction: Ah, last names, and the usual stuck-up prodigy, geniuses that got their asses kicked by their angry female partners.

"Shikamaru! Their monster egos are invading my personal bubble again! Make them stop!" Reaction: *huffing laughter* He sounds so cutely like a kid it's hilarious! XD And what is he? 20 something? HA!

Three hours? There’s not enough time for that. Reaction: ...Oh no he isn't! ...Is he? He's not gonna...probably...nah, Neji'll stop him.

skirmishes Reaction: I should know this word! -o-

...aside from those incidents involving their significant others). Reaction: Hm. I wonder who're those poor 'others'? :D

Ino snorted, and Sakura resisted the urge to make a comment about her namesake. Reaction: Oh, dear Lord. I haven't used that yet? You'd think I'd have something like that in my story considering I make fun of everyone else's name (Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, Kakashi, Tenten, ROCK Lee, Neji, Gai-sensei...etc.) How does a snort sound like, anyway? I know what it sounds like, but in an anime case...? I know how you use it in writing, but...

Like what? Pick up girls at the club? Reaction: ...Shoujo...IT COMES BACK WITH A VENGENCE!

Let’s visit Chouji! Reaction: I don't get it... I thought Shikamaru and Ino were together...

Hyuuga, we need more potatoes. Reaction: *sings* You say potAtoes, I say potatoes. You say tomAtoes, I say tomatos. You say Hyuga, I say waka-laka-ding-dong!

Ten plus years of dealing with Ino had made him skilled in the art of appeasing divas. Reaction: ...lovely...

Well, there’s really not much for you to do here, right now. All the difficult parts come later, and that’s when you can do your thing. So, I was thinking maybe you could get some more ingredients. Reaction: It took me 3 tries to understand that. XD

...any competent shinobi would have no problem handling sharp objects... Reaction: NO DUH! I'VE ALWAYS BEEN WONDERING ABOUT THAT WHENEVER I READ A COOKING-INVOLVED NINJA STORY! XD

Neji and the headbanging (HA!) Reaction: are SO Hyuga-fying that paragraph right's funny, but I think you over did it a little. Just saying.

...dialed the number for Salvation. Reaction: Seriously, or is he just using it as an exageration?

The muscular—“not fat!”—man... Reaction: Wonder who said that...

"That's all right, Ino. I've got it." Reaction: He's so sweet in this fanfiction! Oh, and I just noticed that that should be "alright" instead of "all right". *shrug*

"Who was that?" Reaction: Realization finally dawning...HA! .

And now that that's over with, I have but two things to say. Or maybe three.

1) LOL!




misto-shadow chapter 2 . 12/17/2007
GAH. I very much enjoyed the Sasuke/Neji death glare thing. It was lurvly! - Mwahahhaa, Neji banging head off a wall immense pleasure XD Sasuke and his fetish with fire is also very wonderful. - Most definitely a fave!

. *Mistoffelees_Shadow*
too-much-romance chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
*wide smile* I'm trying to explain it to my mom and she's trying to explain it to me why it's not funny because she doesn't know Naruto. :P Since I'm not in a reviewing mood, I'll keep my opinions short and sweet. Note- I thought this chapter altogether was HIL-AIR-EE-US.

Tomatoes. Reaction: WTF?

Daikon Radish. Reaction: Really?

Bumpkins. Reaction: Is that a real word? If so, then I'm using some time!

Article Three-One of the Husband’s Guide to Harmony, Edition Four, Volume Two... Reaction: Where is this book? I WANT IT! XD

Iwantunagiandpocky. Reaction: I want...what?

“Is that all? Sure, I can get you some, but can it wait ‘til I’ve gotten a bite to eat first?” Silence. “Hinata-chan?” BAM. Reaction: Ouch! That's certainly like that dimwit! Hm...I wonder what she hit him with? If a THING at all! Ha!

Basically all of Sasuke's flashback. Reaction: HOHOHOHO! HAHAHAHA! I just learned this in Health Class yesterday, you'd think I'd remember! Ha! Poor poor Sasuke. Just be glad it wasn't Tenten aiming for your head. Or just your whole body! :D

That’s Article Five-Two… Reaction: Naruto remembers? Why couldn't he remember NOT to do what he did then? Heh.

Camisoles. Reaction: And this is why I use other people's designs to describe clothing. I have no idea what that is. *sweatdrop*

Basically all of Shikamaru's flashback. Reaction: WHAT A NARUTO! I MEAN, REALLY! Who knew paying attention in class would pay off in the real world. XD DUMB*SS! HA! (All of which is said in my room with the door closed.)

Rose petals? Reaction: He forgot their anniversary didn't he? Ha! I'm gonna love this...*snickering*

Negligees? Reaction: Again. Don't do descriptions of clothes. Too...yeah.

A cat in heat. Reaction: The book "The Secret House". *thinking* Heh. 'A dog in heat smells like the after work of driven tires. I wonder what a cat would smell like then...*realizes something* O.O'

At least...not while standing upright. Reaction: WOAH, NEJI! What are you thinking? Well, at least I know he knows she's got game. XD

Wear her hair down. Reaction: What about during...Ahem...yeah...XD

SLAP. SLAM. Reaction: *slamming the computer desk repeatedly with hand, laughing completely out loud*

Contrite. Reaction: Huh? Lemme guess. Impassive? Oh. Not good.

Basically all of Neji's flashback. Reaction: I was saying "HE GOT SERVED! HE GOT TOTALLY SERVED! HE GOT SLAMMED TO THE GROUND, AND...GOT...SERVED!" throughout the ENTIRE (I mean it, ENTIRE) flashback. Heh.

After reading the whole chapter. Reaction: Heh. Their not like you "men". It's not going to work fools. *cackles*

Okay, now that I'm done with that, I've got to say after reading just one chapter...THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED AWESOME! XD

Sorry, just had to do that. The way real men did it...Psshaw. It cancels out anything you think or do if you're putting on a pink lace apron. Ha! Oh, and frilly. Don't forget frilly. Also, thanks for the attention on Nejiten. I just found this randomly so I dont' know what couple this focusses on yet so for now...


Okay, I'm done. TO THE NEXT CHAPPY! (Wow, this is long.)
K A A Y O chapter 2 . 12/2/2007
this sure is funny so lets see hinata sakura and ino are pregent
Obscure Serenity chapter 2 . 11/14/2007
Gah! I love it, okay! Update as soon as possible ]]
Neitzarr chapter 2 . 11/6/2007
Haha yes they are.

No I want cookies...and Potatoe and leek soup...


Update? lol I love your stories
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