Reviews for Darling Nikki
angelsgir chapter 28 . 2/6/2014
Kinda sorry the story seems to end here without a real're writing style is awesome and i love the building of their relationship
medd chapter 28 . 7/4/2013
will "Jessica" show up? can't wait to
ScOut4It chapter 28 . 5/4/2013
They're back!
ScOut4It chapter 25 . 5/4/2013
So five chapters or so of Teri's pov, flashback, sexytimes. If I just want to read for the sex, sure, no prob, but I kinda like the other girls, which is why I picked this story. Besides Teri telling all of this to Claire on the phone, does she come into the story in some meaningful way? Just curious...
ScOut4It chapter 24 . 5/4/2013
ScOut4It chapter 23 . 5/4/2013
Still skimming
ScOut4It chapter 22 . 5/4/2013
Yeah, the Degrassi crossover all of a sudden, just takes away from the main characters. I think this would have worked better as a separate story. I do like crossovers sometimes, but between my lack of familiarity with Degrassi, and the switch in pacing, it really takes a person out of the story. I skipped two chapters because I'm really not interested in Teri since she was never developed within this story, just dropped in.
ScOut4It chapter 8 . 5/4/2013
It appears that I'm your biggest fan lol!
Wow, the last review from two years ago was when I screamed through this story, and I just saw your comment from last September :) Life does that.
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This is a review for chapters I've already reviewed as I read this probably forever ago (like when it was last updated;-).
Ooh, 9 and a half weeks.
Prev chapter response:
/That was hot, hot, hot!
I liked the bit of Italian, and doesn't it work so much better when the meaning is clear? Got her to get to it fast enough I'd say.
And Claire Bear doesn't know it yet, but she's just scored two girlfriends... Meow!/
If Claire doesn't want to share Nikki/Nicole/Jessica with the room service guy (and I wouldn't either), then what does she think about how she found her?
About that...
I am assuming that Nikki decided not to charge Claire and that's why money was never brought up... Because, it has to be for money, unless a person is a total exhibitionist (and even so, why not get paid for what you love?), that's the whole point of her webcam email link.
Bringing me back to...
Nikki's job is to show her body to strangers all over the world. Is it going to be a problem later?
ScOut4It chapter 10 . 5/2/2013
Jealous of these two.
At least you inspired me to find a web-cam girl of my dreams. But, I don't think I'd pull it off as good as Claire Bear *pout*; she really was good at getting into it immediately. That and she found Nikki...
ScOut4It chapter 6 . 5/2/2013
I love the premise!
So sweet.
I really hope you keep writing :)
I like how vulnerable Claire is at first.

It's nice that they want to meet in RL and I like how Nikki shows her just how turned on she is.
Chelsea Van Der Pol chapter 28 . 9/25/2012
hey so I haven't abandoned any of this just been swept away by reality and away too long I'll admit but there is more story to come ..promise I know not everyone enjoyed the degrassi crossover tie-in and I'm sorry if you didn't but it was a story that needed telling and couldn't have summed it up right in just one quick convo between Claire & with that said I'm looking forward to all that is in store :)
ScOut4It chapter 19 . 4/7/2011
Yeah, you did some good outside the room descriptions with Mikah calling in and then the future plans conversation in this chapter. A little more internal dialogue would be nice as I'm really curious about more than what Nikki thinks about how Claire feels and looks, but also about those things I mentioned previously.
ScOut4It chapter 18 . 4/7/2011
Maybe you continue with Nikki's point of view in the next chapter, but just wanted to voice that it is a good opportunity here to mention things that haven't been voiced with Claire (like why she was online, if she's going to continue that work, does Jessica have anything to say, thoughts about the future, etc...).
ScOut4It chapter 17 . 4/7/2011
This part was just great too:

Finally rolling onto her back and guiding me to lay against her , one arm wrapped so lovingly around me, I felt her still inside me, I had to feel that ,to have her fill me up . It was so very hard to lie still, my...

p.s. Longest sex scenes ever :) but really, the story would do with some moving forward about now; the Vegas honeymoon, unfortunately, has to end at some point and further plot action will keep readers more engaged.
ScOut4It chapter 16 . 4/7/2011
I really liked this part:

"I.." can barely breath , having trouble forming a word much less a sentence, a complete thought, but I have to try," you, mmm.. oh baby... just ..Nik..Nicole...I unh mmm."

Well written and -dare I say- poetic.
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