|Reviews for Once Upon a Time|
| December'sRose chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Props for your first attempt at Tokka! I really enjoyed this! It was amusing, I loved the interaction the two had going on. . .Thanks for updating it! I'm going to be putting you on my alerts now!
| AssaultSloth chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
This is very entertaining. Practically the two best characters on the series, and you portrayed them very well. Can't think of the smallest criticism, I'm afraid, unless it's 'why haven't you written more?'.
To be perfectly honest, usually I'd criticize a story like this for being too dialogue-heavy without enough narration around it (I point this out to practically everybody on this site). However, I think this story is an exception, as the setting and action is so minor, the dialogue really is the only thing that's important.
Either way, good job.
| me chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Very nice! Is there more? You know you want to!
| IGAF-kun chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Very cute one-shot. Keep up the good work. _