|Reviews for My Immortal|
| Smoke chapter 1 . 3/14
This is looking okay, save for a few typos.
I saw a very similar My Little Pony story that also featured a dad that puts work before his daughter and so she had a huge house to herself, though that one was only a McMansion. I'm thinking it's because the setup is a convenient way to address why the parents aren't involved and how their allowance will cover any adventure.
Some things that are different from many of these stories is that she doesn't know who he is, which is good. What's great is that there is actually a language barrier at first, though knowing how to pronounce Egyptian is a little alternate-history.
| PureOne1 chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
Wow! This is really good! Hope you update soon!
| xXx chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
Wow, I can't believe I JUST found this treasure today! I'd ask for another chapter but seeing as you haven't updated for a really long time, I won't. :( But it would be nice if you did update! ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
OH MY GOD! YOU ACTUALLY LIKE THE WORST FANFICTION EVER MADE! THAT IS DISGUSTING! (LOL, I'm kidding! It's just that the fact that you named your story My Immortal is just so damn funny! Hell, I don't think you know that horrible mess. There are commentaries by various fanfiction authors if you want to read it... Wait, DON'T!(LOL, I'm kidding on that part too))
| Kakurosu chapter 2 . 4/2/2012
onlu 2 chapters this is inhumane -
i crave to read on and follow the troubles and mishaps in this adventure -
it is like sugar for my brain -
pleeease let it continue -
if not here then atleast somewhere else -
my favorite part uptil now is when they studied each other -
so tense and inspiring and detailed and PLEASE CONTINUE !
| Kakurosu chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
YUSH finaly a Sphinx fanfic that is interresting -
keep it up -
please please keep writing !
| Frida chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Just one little detail i think you should change. The name. I do NOT want this brilliant fic to be mixed up with Tara Gillesbies, the land of "x"s, fishnets and grammatical mistakes.
| WhisperWeeper chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Kyaaah~! I love this! :3 I'm so happy that there's another Sphinx fan out there and I sincerely hope that you'll continue!
| answertalker chapter 2 . 4/2/2011
KEEP WRITING! THERE ARNT THAT MANY STORIES FOR THIS GAME!
| InfiniteLunacy chapter 2 . 4/14/2010
I think you should change the title, it's just wrong to name this wonderful fic after Tara Gilesbie's Horrible fanfic
| Kaitofan101 chapter 2 . 4/2/2010
More please? or is that the end? This story is love. Good job!
| DonutMastr chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Okay so i have no idea who you are or what the heck your story is about but i am going to give you one piece of advice, RENAME IT!
if you don't know what i mean look up my immortal fanfic on google... trust me
| Tytoman chapter 2 . 10/21/2009
normally I'm not much for this kind of story, but I really like this one. my only problem: there isn't more of it yet! please update.
| Razzika chapter 2 . 9/28/2009
This story is so wonderful, beautifuly written and ... its just GREAT ! There are hardly any storys for Sphinx and this is one of my faves! You really should continue writing this, PLEASE ITS SO AWESOME ! I am going to add it to my alerts, just in case you do decide to continue (please?).
| darkoraclegirl chapter 2 . 7/22/2009
This is a great story and I am so looking forward to reading more. Please do continue writing it.