Reviews for Rain
Anime Onnanoko chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
aww kawaii, lol I could imagine Gaara doing that, good story!
Mrs.Hedlund2007 chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
cute, I luv the part about Gaara hehe!
eh chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
I think you have the right idea, but you may want to proofread your story. You keep on forgetting to put in periods. Additionally, when you use ellipses (...), only use three, no more, no less.
shikafangurl chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
nice short story i liked it
Saja Natalia chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
I love it! Reminds me of me and my boyfriend...lol sry.
nine-pents chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
I LOVE IT!(for once your romantic fic didn't suck)see ya K-bell, BYE! .. JSU
SventheCrusader chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Hmm...xXChiyoXx, was it? I think you should fuck off. This story was beautiful, and you obviously have no life other than going around and knocking down people who are doing something. Shut up and die, bastard.

Like I said(to the author), this was well-written. Good work. ;)
Temari fanatic chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Do not feel ashamed of the sappyness for it is needed in this time of...unsappy writing. Please continue if you like and I will continue to read. Or not if you don't write anymore. Either way a fantastic short story it was. I praise your creativeness my friend. Farwell.
cottonline chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
aww i promise i wont flame! hmm...its a little short..what was she upset about?
almostinsane chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
Great story! That's all I can say! God bless!
Flashfire Freak chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
Wonderfully written.
Tsuri Tanaka chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
temari's fuckin older

lov 2 burst you're oxygen bubble but she IS frikin older

and all of u Shika/Tema fans over there i've got ONE message to you...

FUCK OFF

you assholes need age lessons..

girl thats older than boy cannot be together or else they're child will look like the president of the US! and even if shika isn't younger than Temari, that'll still happen :D

gudbye morons
I play wid fir3 chapter 1 . 12/9/2006
I like it! Besides Shika/Tema rock!