|Reviews for Once forgotten, Once Found|
| Moretta chapter 2 . 2/23
I can't seem to log into your main account so hopefully I can reply here
Maybe Pallaton is so badly injured he has to have back legs amputated and is then fitted with a small set of wheels much like disabled dog s have in our world Your story could then focus on the trials of raising a disabled Dinosaur
| MorrieMoon chapter 2 . 1/13
Sad you can't continue but understand how hard it is to write
| LunaChas chapter 2 . 5/15/2014
Please keep going
| GinnyStar chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Well written, good inaction, good background and I am enjoying this story.
| theSunTurnedToCheese chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
i mean, "good" not "ood"..
| theSunTurnedToCheese chapter 2 . 7/10/2007
uhhmn..you have a ood fanfic in here..
just a *few* minor dissapointments in grammar...
but you fare just fine..
hope to read chap 3 real son...
keep it up ~shia~
| Vynne chapter 2 . 6/7/2007
The first chapter had typos and spelling mistakes. The second chapter doesn't seem finished. "...why don't you go play with"
Play with what? Or who? The quote is the last think you wrote on chapter two. It sounds like it has potential. Would you like a beta?